The Great Oasis V1.2

[Moderator]

16:09, 7th Apr 2015
StoPCampinGn00b: The map needs to make radical changes in order for the map to be acceptable. Although it works, the map only has average terrain, bad balance, and little uniqueness. If you make another melee maps, I suggest the links below.

See tutorials:
Beginner - http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/how-create-melee-maps-187652/ (Not exactly recommended, but could be helpful)
Intermediate - http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...e-terraining-hives-terraining-section-184427/ (Recommended for terrain)
Intermediate - http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/competitive-melee-map-252987/ (It doesn't have to be extremely balanced, just try to follow some of the main points here)

 

[WhiteFang]

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I also recommend adding [hidden = Screenshots]before the first screenshot and [/hidden]after the last

 

[Shadow Fury]

A better melee map this time Eric though even this one has problems:

1- You used better the tiles this time (yet you could have used more Rought Dirt on all that Dirt) but the problem is that the terrain is completely flat. No raisings and lowerings are seen. Then, I don't see enough environmental doodads (Cactus, Crater, Geyser etc...)
2- Although this time there are item drops, they are a disaster. Do never let creeps drop specific items. They should be random to let every game be unique and not the same as others
3- I really feel your creep camps are inadequate in many places. I mean, for a Fountain of Health, you put weak murlocs to guard them? Then, you put red camps that don't guard anything? It's worthless to engage a fight with them then. You've inverted the creep camps. Weak creep camps are replaced by strong ones

Overall I feel that this map needs more work before getting approved. I will give it 2/5 and suggest the moderator to AWAIT UPDATE!

 

[EricHellscearm]

OKEY!! update will be coming soon!!!

 

[Dreadwing]

I can help you to make a good description

 

[EricHellscearm]

Hi! Thanks i have find the tutorial but i didn't understand it!! Have you play the map ? It is good ?