Ugh, well first of all you didn't put enough heart into this. Your grammar was alright, but your spelling and tenses were horrible. You should consider revising. Secondly, the overall idea is a little corny. Mind providing an explanation for weaving through a path of blades and voidwalkers? If I were to rate it, it would be between 2 and 3, so I guess a 2.5. Oh, and why are all the heroes the same, with only attribute bonus? It isn't as fun when they are all the same, especially with no special abilities.