The Grand Design

[Moderator]

11:34, 4th May 2014
Orcnet:

Review

TERRAIN .
Definitely, the map symmetry is nice and balanced, But the main problem is, the map is too flat, and look's like empty place .
The tile is not good, you don't mix it properly, you just place it to whole map and you don'y add many variation.
The cliffs are not good , there's no decoration at it .

UNITS:
There's no trees in some goldmines for expansion ,
The neutral guards of goldmines are too weak, therefore the players can expand quickly and they cannot feel the THRILL of the game .
The expansion goldmines holds a large amount of gold, which is not good for few players, you must add more goldmines.

Suggestions

-Add more decoration , like grass, trees, rocks and other doodads,\
-Add small hills or any land design to enhance the terrain, because its too flat .
-Add tile variation and mix them well.
-Put some "medium" neutral camps .
-Add more strategic area .
-Add goldmines for expansion and reduce the amount of the other goldmines.

ratings : 2/5

 

[eubz]

Type: None
Category: None

Please, fix these two.

 

[Streak]

Type: None
Category: None

Please, fix these two.

you should really put a type and category some maps of yours don"t have this do what eubz say.

 

[hakonwarcraft]

Type: None
Category: None

Please, fix these two.

Oh I didn't see that issue

 

[eubz]

Downloading for a review.
EDIT:

Some Comments

1. I can see that the item drops fit with the creep level. This is good. I have also seen there ire already items in the ground, remove that.
2. The terrain is mostly balanced but you lack tile variations. Do some experiments in tile variations. Use at least 3-4 tiles. Also, the terrain is flat, do use the raise and lower tools so the slope will vary. You might also want to add some environmental doodads.
3. Trees are just enough. You have your expansion goldmines having 20k golds, fine.
4. Expansion goldmines should be guarded by orange or red creep encampments.
5. You lack orange and red creep encampments. Add some.
6. I recommend you use terrain fog and global weather found in Map Options.

Finally, I could see that the map has potentials and is going to improve much. Please, do what I told you and we'll see what will happen.

 

[hakonwarcraft]

Downloading for a review.
EDIT:

Some Comments

1. I can see that the item drops fit with the creep level. This is good. I have also seen there ire already items in the ground, remove that.
2. The terrain is mostly balanced but you lack tile variations. Do some experiments in tile variations. Use at least 3-4 tiles. Also, the terrain is flat, do use the raise and lower tools so the slope will vary. You might also want to add some environmental doodads.
3. Trees are just enough. You have your expansion goldmines having 20k golds, fine.
4. Expansion goldmines should be guarded by orange or red creep encampments.
5. You lack orange and red creep encampments. Add some.
6. I recommend you use terrain fog and global weather found in Map Options.

Finally, I could see that the map has potentials and is going to improve much. Please, do what I told you and we'll see what will happen.

Well I have made ​​some changes that you see but I'm going to try to parent anymore. but we'll see as I lost not only lay out all over the place son that there will be such that an army can go clean through

 

[hakonwarcraft]

I want to know

what do you my friend's think is the best race. Naga, Human, Orc, Troll, Ogre, Furbolg, Murgul, Murlock, Centaur, Tauren, Undead, High Elven-Blood Elven, Night Elf, Demon, Gnoll, Golem. or have anyone a race they can name off ?

 

[Streak]

Downloading for a review.
EDIT:

Some Comments

1. I can see that the item drops fit with the creep level. This is good. I have also seen there ire already items in the ground, remove that.
2. The terrain is mostly balanced but you lack tile variations. Do some experiments in tile variations. Use at least 3-4 tiles. Also, the terrain is flat, do use the raise and lower tools so the slope will vary. You might also want to add some environmental doodads.
3. Trees are just enough. You have your expansion goldmines having 20k golds, fine.
4. Expansion goldmines should be guarded by orange or red creep encampments.
5. You lack orange and red creep encampments. Add some.
6. I recommend you use terrain fog and global weather found in Map Options.

Finally, I could see that the map has potentials and is going to improve much. Please, do what I told you and we'll see what will happen.

wow you really review it all anyway i saw that issues and the only this (on my opinion) the description .

 

[hakonwarcraft]

hehe

well I think I have done it very good , very near approved.

but do you think this map at all get's approved

 

[hakonwarcraft]

well you can have right.

But I do see that my description has been better than all my last map's



I have just to say-Happy Easter

 

[hakonwarcraft]

hello I have updated one thing and the creeps is set red creep camps one whit the mines.

 

[Samahp]

Hey, if you want to get a good description, look here. I think your description needs more bbcode... Look at mine for example...

 

[hakonwarcraft]

Hello can it be that hard to take away ( not guruanting to be working ) hello it works fin but the map have nothing some missing. cannot this map be approved. ?

 

[eubz]

The map hasn't changed a lot since I give comments. Please, do follow what I have commented and suggested about your map.

 

[Orcnet]

What's with the enormous gap in the description? lol.

 

[Daffa]

Hello can it be that hard to take away ( not guruanting to be working ) hello it works fin but the map have nothing some missing. cannot this map be approved. ?

It's a auto script, when a map approved, it will change to : "guaranteed to be working" (sorta like that).

 

[BLazeKraze]

Review

TERRAIN .
Definitely, the map symmetry is nice and balanced, But the main problem is, the map is too flat, and look's like empty place .
The tile is not good, you don't mix it properly, you just place it to whole map and you don'y add many variation.
The cliffs are not good , there's no decoration at it .

UNITS:
There's no trees in some goldmines for expansion ,
The neutral guards of goldmines are too weak, therefore the players can expand quickly and they cannot feel the THRILL of the game .
The expansion goldmines holds a large amount of gold, which is not good for few players, you must add more goldmines.

Suggestions

-Add more decoration , like grass, trees, rocks and other doodads,\
-Add small hills or any land design to enhance the terrain, because its too flat .
-Add tile variation and mix them well.
-Put some "medium" neutral camps .
-Add more strategic area .
-Add goldmines for expansion and reduce the amount of the other goldmines.

ratings : 2/5

 

[eubz]

Hello can it be that hard to take away ( not guruanting to be working ) hello it works fin but the map have nothing some missing. cannot this map be approved. ?

There are a lot of things that you haven't changed since I gave comments. Please, have some time to somewhat follow the suggestions given to you. As I have said, I see a very little change in this map. Now, you know why this is not yet approved.