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well here you go. I'm not a great editor, so i tends to make ALOT of mistakes. so plz be ever so kind 2 point them out so i can improve me self ;3
Chapter II
Heartbeat. Ralf heard or rather felt a heartbeat nearby. It’s faint, but he knows it’s there. As more of his consciousness returns to him, he realized that it was his own heart that’s beating.
“Ugh…” moaned Ralf.
“He’s awake! Oh thank God. For a second there I thought he was a goner.” A blurry voice echoed in Ralf’s mind.
“Ah, so he is. I guess making me carry him all the way from the shaft wasn’t a stupid idea after all.” Replied another voice as he continues. “And you know what that means don’t you? You owe me a drink. Good ones too, not the cheap ass ones you get for two dollars in a bar.”
“Fine, provided we make it out of here alive that is.” said the woman.
As Ralf weakly opened his eyes, he saw two figures, a senior looking man and a much younger woman. They’re both in lab coats.
“Wh … Where am I?” asked Ralf weakly.
“Hush, don’t talk, you’re severally injured from the long fall.” replied the woman. “You need as much rest as you can get; I’m injecting this into your arm. It will heal you up in the matter of hours. As right now, just rest.”
Soon after her words, Ralf felt his arm, the followed by the rest of his body, in extreme pain. But no word came to his mouth. As the pain continues, he felt tired and again lost his consciousness.
Chapter III
“Fools! You cannot save yourself or anyone else!” shrieked by a huge hideous five-eyed monster, holding many nude and unconscious humans in one of his three claws, yelling at a group of terrified humans a few meters away from Ralf.
“The plan we’ve set in motion for so many centuries ago cannot be stopped by any mortal agencies!” the monster continues as he bit off the upper halves of four human and devoured them.
“All that you humans has ever done is nothing but a fleeting dream! A dream which you shall awaken from! And realising that you’re drowning in a greater nightmare! A nightmare of agony! A reality of torment!”
Ralf gazed at the monster in absolute horror. Then he suddenly realized that he has been chained to a wall which looked like pulsing flesh. Then the monster turns its attention to Ralf.
“Greetings little creature. I see that you are filled with horror. Good, that’s very good. It means it’s time to put you with the rest of them.” As the monster reached out to grab Ralf, he screamed “AHHHH!”
Ralf suddenly realized he is sitting up on the floor.
“It was just a nightmare.” Ralf told himself.
Chapter II
Heartbeat. Ralf heard or rather felt a heartbeat nearby. It’s faint, but he knows it’s there. As more of his consciousness returns to him, he realized that it was his own heart that’s beating.
“Ugh…” moaned Ralf.
“He’s awake! Oh thank God. For a second there I thought he was a goner.” A blurry voice echoed in Ralf’s mind.
“Ah, so he is. I guess making me carry him all the way from the shaft wasn’t a stupid idea after all.” Replied another voice as he continues. “And you know what that means don’t you? You owe me a drink. Good ones too, not the cheap ass ones you get for two dollars in a bar.”
“Fine, provided we make it out of here alive that is.” said the woman.
As Ralf weakly opened his eyes, he saw two figures, a senior looking man and a much younger woman. They’re both in lab coats.
“Wh … Where am I?” asked Ralf weakly.
“Hush, don’t talk, you’re severally injured from the long fall.” replied the woman. “You need as much rest as you can get; I’m injecting this into your arm. It will heal you up in the matter of hours. As right now, just rest.”
Soon after her words, Ralf felt his arm, the followed by the rest of his body, in extreme pain. But no word came to his mouth. As the pain continues, he felt tired and again lost his consciousness.
Chapter III
“Fools! You cannot save yourself or anyone else!” shrieked by a huge hideous five-eyed monster, holding many nude and unconscious humans in one of his three claws, yelling at a group of terrified humans a few meters away from Ralf.
“The plan we’ve set in motion for so many centuries ago cannot be stopped by any mortal agencies!” the monster continues as he bit off the upper halves of four human and devoured them.
“All that you humans has ever done is nothing but a fleeting dream! A dream which you shall awaken from! And realising that you’re drowning in a greater nightmare! A nightmare of agony! A reality of torment!”
Ralf gazed at the monster in absolute horror. Then he suddenly realized that he has been chained to a wall which looked like pulsing flesh. Then the monster turns its attention to Ralf.
“Greetings little creature. I see that you are filled with horror. Good, that’s very good. It means it’s time to put you with the rest of them.” As the monster reached out to grab Ralf, he screamed “AHHHH!”
Ralf suddenly realized he is sitting up on the floor.
“It was just a nightmare.” Ralf told himself.
