The Dark Colosseum 2

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Vengeancekael -
Date: 2012/May/16 17:59:26

Reasons:
Poor and lacking terrain: Terrain Tutorial
Poor Gameplay, not a lot of originality or fun: General Mapping Tutorials
Other:
Check out the tutorials section: Tutorials
Check out the Map Development Section: Map Development Section
Check out the World Editor Help Zone (Trigger issues, object editor, overall WE issues): WE Help Zone

Comment: [Rejected]
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[shinji]

Subscribing....

Feel free to rate and comment.

 

[sonofjay]

If you want a unprotected version of this.. contact me



The Review:

BAD:

• You're using blizzards default spells
• Poor spell tooltips

GOOD:

• Fun gameplay
• Gladiators are somewhat balance
• Lots of items to choose from
• Neat terrain

SUGGESTIONS:

• Try to add a timer before every round, if you're new here you don't have time to buy items or even read their descriptions
• Improve your tooltip
• Use triggered spells
• Maybe add some game modes
• You can still improve your terrain, its neat but not awesome.

My rating: None for now until improvements are applied.

My notes:
This is a cool and fun map to play, plus the low filesize, its easy to get a full house on b.net or garena

 

[Drunken_Jackal]

You should seriously use a better preview image.
A Darker one.

 

[shinji]

You should seriously use a better preview image.
A Darker one.

This is fine. It's a joke. You're not laughing...

I can't wait to hear you're review.

 

[Dr. Brewery Ale]

You should seriously use a better preview image.
A Darker one.

Make the Preview Image more epic in order to catch the peoples eyes.
Just like this:

Picture

AND MANY MORE JUST SEARCH IN GOOGLE.
PIECE OF ADVICE:
I ASSURE YOU [100%]THE MORE EPIC YOUR PREVIEW IMAGE THE MORE PEOPLE WILL BE ATTRACTED TO DOWNLOAD,COMMENT OR RATE YOUR MAP. EDIT IT ALSO IN THE PHOTOSHOP SO IT WILL NOT BE OBVIOUS.


IM GOING TO SUBMIT MY REVIEW OF THIS MAP THIS WEDNESDAY.
ONE LAST THING.
BRO MAKE THE ARENA LIKE A COLOSSEUM.
ROUND, Like this:

I suggest to make this in your next version.

GOOD JOB. Rating: 9/10
Good Luck in your next Version.

Regards

FROM: Dr. Brewery Ale, the Drunk Beer Doctor of Hive.

 

[shinji]

Make the Preview Image more epic in order to catch the peoples eyes.
Just like this:

Picture

AND MANY MORE JUST SEARCH IN GOOGLE.
PIECE OF ADVICE:
I ASSURE YOU [100%]THE MORE EPIC YOUR PREVIEW IMAGE THE MORE PEOPLE WILL BE ATTRACTED TO DOWNLOAD,COMMENT OR RATE YOUR MAP. EDIT IT ALSO IN THE PHOTOSHOP SO IT WILL NOT BE OBVIOUS.


IM GOING TO SUBMIT MY REVIEW OF THIS MAP THIS WEDNESDAY.
ONE LAST THING.
BRO MAKE THE ARENA LIKE A COLOSSEUM.
ROUND, Like this:

I suggest to make this in your next version.

GOOD JOB. Rating: 9/10
Good Luck in your next Version.

Regards

FROM: Dr. Brewery Ale, the Drunk Beer Doctor of Hive.

Thanks. I'll make 3 if this gets approved.

 

[sonofjay]

Drop my review on my post above..

 

[shinji]

If you want a unprotected version of this.. contact me



The Review:

BAD:

• You're using blizzards default spells
• Poor spell tooltips

GOOD:

• Fun gameplay
• Gladiators are somewhat balance
• Lots of items to choose from
• Neat terrain

SUGGESTIONS:

• Try to add a timer before every round, if you're new here you don't have time to buy items or even read their descriptions
• Improve your tooltip
• Use triggered spells
• Maybe add some game modes
• You can still improve your terrain, its neat but not awesome.

My rating: None for now until improvements are applied.

My notes:
This is a cool and fun map to play, plus the low filesize, its easy to get a full house on b.net or garena

Thanks. I won't be able to change the blizzard spells because I don't want to destroy the good balance. For the timer, I will make the wait time changeable by player 1. The terrain, I can still improve it. Game modes will be added soon.

 

[-Kobas-]

Dual Blader has only 30 mana and spells cost 50 and 35.
Loading screen can be better, also I suggest attachments combined with items

 

[shinji]

Dual Blader has only 30 mana and spells cost 50 and 35.
Loading screen can be better, also I suggest attachments combined with items

Attachments?? What do you mean? There are sword attachments already.

You have to train intelligence to use spells with dual blader.

I can get a better loading screen. A darker one.

 

[sonofjay]

@Shinji,

You can change all the blizzard spells to triggered spells and still keep the balance of the map.....
Really man its just up to you to balance the damage, cooldown, etc etc.

You don't want to try, thats the problem with you, I told you this a long time ago to change the spells, improve the tooltips, remake the terrain but non of this has been made(except for a little change on the terrain).

You just need to give effort on your map, your map got rejected because of your lack of effort to improve it, not that the mods hate you.

Be open minded boy, I'm helping you to improve your map, not to ruin it.

 

[shinji]

@Shinji,

You can change all the blizzard spells to triggered spells and still keep the balance of the map.....
Really man its just up to you to balance the damage, cooldown, etc etc.

You don't want to try, thats the problem with you, I told you this a long time ago to change the spells, improve the tooltips, remake the terrain but non of this has been made(except for a little change on the terrain).

You just need to give effort on your map, your map got rejected because of your lack of effort to improve it, not that the mods hate you.

Be open minded boy, I'm helping you to improve your map, not to ruin it.

I see. You're wrong at the tooltip part... I added discriptions. Well... If I'm going to change the spells, I'll just make a remake version that has "custom attack system" and "triggered spells". I'll keep the 2nd version like this.

I'll start today. What else do you suggest?

 

[sonofjay]

I already tell you on the VM what I want to see.

And yeah you add description on your tooltips, but your tooltips can still be better. (color text, more information etc etc.)

 

[shinji]

I already tell you on the VM what I want to see.

And yeah you add description on your tooltips, but your tooltips can still be better. (color text, more information etc etc.)

See THIS.

 

[Vengeancekael]

• It's raining and yet the environment is a fiery place, with lava terrain tiles.
• Boring default warcraft 3 spells
• Unoriginal, literally in every possible way
• Plain boring, because of the unoriginality and weird terrain
• When do you ever get teleported back to the shop? I kept getting teleported behind the opened gate and the next round would just start

Also that is the worst argument you can ever use, 'because I want to keep the game balanced', that's just wrong. That's just another excuse for 'I'm too lazy' or "I can't innovate'.
You can easily come up with some fresh new spells that can easily be balanced.

 

[shinji]

• It's raining and yet the environment is a fiery place, with lava terrain tiles.
• Boring default warcraft 3 spells
• Unoriginal, literally in every possible way
• Plain boring, because of the unoriginality and weird terrain
• When do you ever get teleported back to the shop? I kept getting teleported behind the opened gate and the next round would just start

Also that is the worst argument you can ever use, 'because I want to keep the game balanced', that's just wrong. That's just another excuse for 'I'm too lazy' or "I can't innovate'.
You can easily come up with some fresh new spells that can easily be balanced.

You have to play this with more than 4 people.....

About the other things, I will fix it. I'm not lazy. I'm going to prove it to you.