The Conquest of America (Terrain)

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14:31, 11th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
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[Narrat0r]

Looks nice from the minimap, but you should also add some screenshots to make it look more appealing.

 

[Griffone]

Looks nice from the minimap, but you should also add some screenshots to make it look more appealing.

Ok! Will do it with the next update!

 

[biHmapmaker]

Ok, here's some sort of "review" for this map :

[+] It's kinda good representer of American continet from far time away.
[+] Kinda good use of Raise tool
[+] Nice water

[-] Size is too small. This size of map is only suitable for some hero arenas or one-lane AoS (but maybe that's what you making - but suggesting by title, it's not)
[-] Undetailed - good terrains needs good details.
[-] Weird placed trees, random objects without purpose and without any road (no matther what age was, I suppose that there were some roads at least) ...

I give 2/5, but this terrain needs some work
GL in future =)

 

[Griffone]

Ok, here's some sort of "review" for this map :

[+] It's kinda good representer of American continet from far time away.
[+] Kinda good use of Raise tool
[+] Nice water

[-] Size is too small. This size of map is only suitable for some hero arenas or one-lane AoS (but maybe that's what you making - but suggesting by title, it's not)
[-] Undetailed - good terrains needs good details.
[-] Weird placed trees, random objects without purpose and without any road (no matther what age was, I suppose that there were some roads at least) ...

I give 2/5, but this terrain needs some work
GL in future =)

Thanks! Exactly what I needed: everything specified and commented! I will keep your suggestions in mind when improving terrain!

 

[Lambdadelta]

"also known as" can be abbreivated to AKA. It just looks more professional.

There is a lot you could improve, especially in regards to the water and the cliff, I mean:

(insert screenshot later if I am bothered)

The water is squared off? (Really, I'll get a screenshot in like 7 hours)

 

[gerf]

Beautiful water, beautiful mountains. But verry small map.

 

[Griffone]

I will get screenshots with next update.

 

[phoenixfire]

In the 15th century, I doubt that there would still be a huge flood in the east. I mean, in 500 years the water couldn't disappear, I think there should be more land.

 

[-Kobas-]

Give some thumbs up! (not necessary)

Please remove that!

 

[Griffone]

In the 15th century, I doubt that there would still be a huge flood in the east. I mean, in 500 years the water couldn't disappear, I think there should be more land.

I am working on it.

 

[Griffone]

Please remove that!

Done it.

 

[Lambdadelta]

Sorry, I'm just too damn lazy to screenshot it. LOL.

 

[-Kobas-]

Very poor quality, map is 2 small, don't like like North America at first place, I vote for rejection, sry dude, terrain don't look like this ↓

1/5 Vote for Rejection

 

[phoenixfire]

IMO its not bad enough to have a 1/5.
My rating is 3/5, and approval if some changes are made to look a bit more like North America.

 

[Griffone]

IMO its not bad enough to have a 1/5.
My rating is 3/5, and approval if some changes are made to look a bit more like North America.

Thanks! When I'll have some free time I'll make it bigger and use actual map of the real America.

 

[-Kobas-]

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The Conquest of America (Terrain)
Created by MayBePro aka Griffone ; Uploaded by: Griffone

Review

Hmmm... I already told you before that terrain don't look like North America a all...

Check picture below, it's Mexico, no room for more units...

Other than that that terrain is really simple, tiles are really bad, trees are spammed all over place as well as ice blocks...

And because you didn't make any progress last few weeks I will set map status to rejected!
Please just update this one if you improve map and send map mods message so we can unlock thread for you!
Thanks and have a nice day!

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