The Attack

[Moderator]

18:27, 9th May 2009 by bounty hunter2:
Don't upload such crappy maps here, use Epicwar instead. See comments below, Rejected.

 

[Septimus]

No proper description (Rules violation)
Blank terrain (What else could be comment about it? It lack of tiles variation and destructible/doodad usage)
No music, no animation, no sound and scripting/triggering lack of basic cinematic setup.
Transmission was poorly set as well.

1/5 (Unacceptable)

 

[Amigurumi]

+Positive+ / #Neutral# / -Negative- too short you only see the group of people camera no sounds no music bad terrain bad transmissions lacking description 1/5 Unacceptable

Why did you for all transmissions the cinematic mode on? this looks quite dumb...
And there is always the sound 'We are attacked'.
I think it's too short, and not worth staying at the hive.

 

[Archangel_Tidusx]

this should help
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/site-discussion-97/maps-section-125427/

 

[Zelda.Alex]

>>Place description at the place where I choose maps in the game. Also you need to place a little description on Hive too.
>>Spelling mistakes are present in the map at many places.
>>The sound of fighting while they are talking makes it uninteresting.
>>Tile variations are needed. Doodads should have been used. Height variations also help in making the terrain better.
>>What was the use of placing so many zombies when none was shown in the cinematic.
>>You have used a custom model. Where is its credits? Credits are essential.
>>Custom sounds/music enhances the quality of a cinematic(map in general). You could have used it.
>>The duration of cinematic was too short. Try making it bit longer so it may interest the users so they may wait to see the next part.
>>You need to work on camera movement.
>>When one dialogue ends & the next starts I can see the menu in-game. I should not be able to see that.

Currently it is 1/5 quality. Try to improve & go in Cinematic before you update this.

 

[chilla_killa]

Very Boring, sound of fighting units is annoying, stupid talk, seeing the menu between transmissions, much too short, bad terrain, no animations, senseless
0,5/5

Suggestion: Show the soldiers fighting, use sounds, make it longer, you can make part 2 in the same map

chilla_killa

 

[busterkomo]

This is my review of The Attack.

Terrible description, grammar, sound, and just about everything else.

Rating: 1.0 and not recommended for approval.

My Recommendations:
Read a few tutorials on cinematic creation, and than a few more on modding warcraft 3 in general. To make this worthy of approval, you'll need to completely remake it from the ground up after your hone your modding skills.