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teh Desert of D00m

Discussion in 'Terrain & Level Design' started by Revolve, Jun 10, 2009.

  1. Revolve

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    Yeah, whatever.
    Anywayz, an attempt to create a desert and my first sun.
    The background is pretty much complete, though the middle and foreground has merely started. Also lights ain't 100% done yet ^^

    Tell me what you think :)
     

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  2. syltman

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    I like it!
     
  3. Revolve

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    Heheh, thank you very much :)
     
  4. X.e.r.e.X

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    The trees and the grass are just way too dark and it lacks content.
     
  5. BlinkforFear

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    k so you have a desert and then in the background you dont have a desert? i dont understand this? its green its a field of grass in a desert? its a good terrain i just dont get how it goes from desert to fields of green grass
     
  6. Oziris

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    Lets see here:

    1. The grass is dark and the water is bright, how come? make the grass lighter and the rest.
    2.Those rocks look really bad and why are there only rocks on the left side of the terrain? add them in the far distance, but only smaller.
    3. The sky should be bright! if you want it to be more realistic.
    4.The tiles is boring, add more dirt.
    5.The fence looks really out of placed, there are placed wrong in other words, and what are they doing there anyway? show us a house of the tauren or something else.
    6.Add some glow doodads, it will be better.
    7.The fog looks bad, change it into some brighter fog.
     
  7. Revolve

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    UPDATE! :D


    @X.E.R.E.X - Thank you for noticing hehe, changed ^^ and i only had the "outline", more detailed content now ^^

    @BlinkForFear - Well, might look wrong, but the terrain is supposed to be Barrens like, and there are oases in Barrens, and I think it adds more contrast to the whole desert ^^
     

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    nice adds but if it were me i would take some of the animals out. i dont know y but for me any living thing that is not a plant or just some dark lord of awesomeness kinda brings the terrain down in my opinion.

    i dont know if its just me but all those animals bring my attention to them and not the fire, which is bad because im assuming the focus of the picture is the fire.

    TAKE AN ANIMAL OUT :D
     
  9. Oziris

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    You did not thank me.... :((((
    Anyway, the flag looks ugly, and it covers the terrain, put it somewhere else and allot smaller. You should add a glow doodad, just try it.
     
  10. Oziris

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    o_O am i being ignored? are my posts invisible???
    I'm confused.... @_@
     
  11. Revolve

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    Lol animals ^^ They are Tauren :D

    Okay, I will remove one of 'em :)
     
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    i like both screenies =)) they have that subtle gloomy air about them, love it
     
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    Whats with the Spirit Walker's long legs? Take screenshot again when he is not standing like that? >_<
     
  14. Revolve

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    Thanks Trillium :)

    Super-Sheep, yeah lol animation... Will take new pic tomorow :)
     
  15. ~Void~

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    Yes.
     
  16. Revolve

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    Did Oziris post here? Lulz? What's up with him anyway xD

    Anyway Update =D Worked on lightning and filling up some empty spaces. More contrast now ^^ Also replaced palms with Barrens trees, and a more red sun + clouds (Barrens like)

    Off-topic: Thanks Void :D You gave me the big green crystal :3
     

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    Pretty solid. The sun is a little out of proportion, but other than that, nice.
     
  18. Revolve

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    Thank you :) I aggre on the sun, done my best to make it right, pretty hard to be honest.
     
  19. Destructor [DoR]

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    Nice, remove the grass in the fire and it´s perfect ;)
     
  20. Revolve

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    Yeah, that makes sence lol :p will be removed :)