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teh Desert of D00m

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Yeah, whatever.
Anywayz, an attempt to create a desert and my first sun.
The background is pretty much complete, though the middle and foreground has merely started. Also lights ain't 100% done yet ^^

Tell me what you think :)
 

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k so you have a desert and then in the background you dont have a desert? i dont understand this? its green its a field of grass in a desert? its a good terrain i just dont get how it goes from desert to fields of green grass
 
Lets see here:

1. The grass is dark and the water is bright, how come? make the grass lighter and the rest.
2.Those rocks look really bad and why are there only rocks on the left side of the terrain? add them in the far distance, but only smaller.
3. The sky should be bright! if you want it to be more realistic.
4.The tiles is boring, add more dirt.
5.The fence looks really out of placed, there are placed wrong in other words, and what are they doing there anyway? show us a house of the tauren or something else.
6.Add some glow doodads, it will be better.
7.The fog looks bad, change it into some brighter fog.
 
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UPDATE! :D


@X.E.R.E.X - Thank you for noticing hehe, changed ^^ and i only had the "outline", more detailed content now ^^

@BlinkForFear - Well, might look wrong, but the terrain is supposed to be Barrens like, and there are oases in Barrens, and I think it adds more contrast to the whole desert ^^
 

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nice adds but if it were me i would take some of the animals out. i dont know y but for me any living thing that is not a plant or just some dark lord of awesomeness kinda brings the terrain down in my opinion.

i dont know if its just me but all those animals bring my attention to them and not the fire, which is bad because im assuming the focus of the picture is the fire.

TAKE AN ANIMAL OUT :D
 
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Did Oziris post here? Lulz? What's up with him anyway xD

Anyway Update =D Worked on lightning and filling up some empty spaces. More contrast now ^^ Also replaced palms with Barrens trees, and a more red sun + clouds (Barrens like)

Off-topic: Thanks Void :D You gave me the big green crystal :3
 

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WOOT!!!!!! animal taken out FTW !!!! nice update looks a lot better

Edit: NO YOU took the palm trees out that was my favorite part!!! it actually is realistic you realize that right? your in a desert (lots of sun) and it has a water source, perfect growing conditions for a palm tree
 
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