Spray Shield

[Moderator]

20:58, 28th Aug 2009
hvo-busterkomo: Rejected for breaking many submission rules. Please read the rules more thoroughly next time.

 

[Deuterium]

Deuterium's Brief Review:

Spray Shield

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1. Leaks points:

• Set guk = (Units within 250.00 of (Position of caster) matching (((Matching unit) Not equal to caster) and (((Matching unit) belongs to an ally of (Owner of caster)) Equal to False)))

• Set angle = (Angle from (Position of caster) to (Position of targ))

• Set PositionTarg = (Position of targ)

^(kalkan)


2. Neither MUI nor MPI.


3. It would affect buildings:

• Set guk = (Units within 250.00 of (Position of caster) matching (((Matching unit) Not equal to caster) and (((Matching unit) belongs to an ally of (Owner of caster)) Equal to False)))

4. Uncreative and unoriginal.


5. No tooltips and no decent test map.


6. Uses Wait:

• Wait 15.00 seconds

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No offense, but this is one badly done spell. Besides being unoriginal and uncreative, triggering leaks and isn't efficient. It would also bug once you get close to a structure.

If you're willing to fix the just mentioned issues, feel free to check the http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorial-submission-283/essentials-tutorial-141191/ or privately message me if the tutorial isn't enough.

Good luck!

 

[tryfear]

Oh Tnx