Spider Nest

[aki15]

Spider Nest

I spent some time on making a spider nest terrain !
Here are some screenies !

Spider Nest

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[Oziris]

Looks cool, some things you should fix:

1. Make it less flat.
2. Try using http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-everlive-171995/?prev=search=web&d=list&r=20 and http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/spiders-victim-159608/?prev=search=web&d=list&r=20

 

[The_Olorin]

Just a simple and nice idea, it look pretty good, however you could do some things more:

1. Those changes what Oziris said, i agree with them.
2. I dont see rocks nowhere, couple of those wouldn't hurt in my opinion.
3. Try, maybe to tint eggs little bit darker, atm they are too bright colored, so it dosen't fit to the dark theme picture.
4. Add light fog(if you already have, them make it little bit stronger).

Good work never then less.

 

[aki15]

Looks cool, some things you should fix:

1. Make it less flat.
2. Try using http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...-everlive-171995/?prev=search=web&d=list&r=20 and http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/spiders-victim-159608/?prev=search=web&d=list&r=20

Ya i wanted to do that, but forgot , gonna update thread for 15 minutes !
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UPDATED !

 

[Oziris]

Looks better but it's still flat.

 

[-Devinity-]

Good work!

+rep for good usage of in-game models!

 

[aki15]

Thanks all !

 

[fladdermasken]

As Oziris suggested, it is rather flat. Secondly, I don't really like that grass model for this occasion. Looks like messy pixels to me.
Lastly, adding the Light From Above doodad is a brilliant mean to enhance a terrain. However, I suggest you make the model bigger so you don't see the clear edges.
All in all, I must say you'be done a good job. I love the sewer pipes and you've done a good job with tiles.
Keep it up.

 

[aki15]

As Oziris suggested, it is rather flat. Secondly, I don't really like that grass model for this occasion. Looks like messy pixels to me.
Lastly, adding the Light From Above doodad is a brilliant mean to enhance a terrain. However, I suggest you make the model bigger so you don't see the clear edges.
All in all, I must say you'be done a good job. I love the sewer pipes and you've done a good job with tiles.
Keep it up.

Will update it later, and thanks !

 

[M0rbid]

I really love the atmosphere of the first screenshot, however like it's already mentioned what pops into the eyes is, that the terrain is very flat. Let's say that your choice of doodad is a bit unlucky at some parts as well.
The grass is placed - sry for the harsh word - miserable. You need to work on it to make it look more realistic and less abrupt and artificial.
However working on this is worth it for sure, the atmosphere looks good.

 

[johannesr]

Really nice, gj!

 

[darkzxx]

hey why not use the web model orizis suggested and make it bigger and switch it with the green web,it looks kinda ugly to me