Space Prison Break

[Moderator]

08:55, 30th Aug 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

 

[Djokula]

I dont have any idea why picture looks like this,but it will be fixed by tommorow

 

[Bugz]

Need screenshots, Set up the information about the hero:
Name
Story:
Looks:

And so on. Also dont use bb codes on large amounts of text

 

[Djokula]

I already said that

 

[Bugz]

I dont have any idea why picture looks like this,but it will be fixed by tommorow

That and what i said is two different things.

 

[Djokula]

Then explain me how you thought i need to make info about hero,not in hidden or what ?

 

[Djokula]

About screens that will come later

 

[Bugz]

Your hero is named Adrian.He is unusual soldier with energy armor,and energy sword.His current spells are: 1. Energy Wave 2.Energy Shield 3.Bladestorm

Its way to messy. need to be setted up

 

[Djokula]

Setted up how ?

 

[Bugz]

In this map you will play as the hero called Adrian. Adrian is a unusual soldier, fighting with his armor and sword of pure energy is he fighting the enemy forces

Current spell:

(Icon)
Name:

(Example):

Name: Thunderstorm

 

[Djokula]

I guess i can do it like that,only without pic i cant put that atm.Thx for advise btw

 

[Bugz]

No problem, good luck with your map

 

[Djokula]

I uploaded map few hours ago with bb code as the rules say and your only one that said anything WTH? oO

 

[Bugz]

Its not alot of people that is checking pending maps, just be patient

 

[Djokula]

ok

 

[AsXurian]

Sounds Like fun, will test and get back to you.


Edit: 08/10/2011 - 7:10am

This is good single-player map. I like your idea and the hero's skills are well suited for the task.

A few things i did not like, the first would have to be the difficulty throughout stays the same, the only time i felt pressed any differently would have to be at the end when i needed to open hte gates while the others fought.
The second would have to be that when you break another prisoner's door they don't join you. I honestly thought that in the beginning when i broke to door oposite the sappers inside would go kamikaze on the guards butts.
The third would have to be that if ur inside a mech at the end of boss fight it dies on you, idk if thats meant to be but it does happen.
The fourth would be the inconsistency of the story with the spaceship garage. I wondered if he couldn't just enter a spaceship and fly away? I suppose he could get shot down or tracked...... Did I just answer my own question? XD

This i do not necesarily do not like, more of it doesn't make sense, I had a couple blinded beasts left after the (i think it was the 2nd) Mech fight. I wondered why they could go through tele's also even if they didn't last too much longer XD.

Things I loved, Adrian and the Alien Commanders models. The blinded beasts were ok but it felt like I've seen them before <. I loved the mech models, i've ALWAYS been a big fan of the Warhammer 40k series models. good icons for Adrian's skills. Good terrain although it lakes a creepy-ness that supposed alien abductors would have.

Terrain 4/5
Concept 4.5/5
Gameplay 4.5/5

Total 13/15 = 4.3/5

Good Job

 

[Djokula]

Thx for this detailed review.
1.Prisoners arent supposed to get in fight atm i may do that in some future version
2.Its is easy atm im still looking for the way to make it a bit harder
3.Mech is supposed to die when boss die XD
4.Yes you did actualy XD
5.I will balance beast's so you dont have any XD

it took me 2 days to find model for main char,about blinded beast model i didnt had any idea what else to use,if i find better i will change
Mech's was probably best idea i got when i started making map,and terrain had to look like you described it XD
Well thx again what else i can say,oh yea add some rating it will help my map A LOT im rly trying to get it approved :/

 

[Vengeancekael]

AsXurian has given your map a 4.3 rating, however he has forgotten to actually 'vote'.
I'll be testing this soon.

 

[Djokula]

Ok thx,ye i guess he forgot lol

 

[Vengeancekael]

Review:

Gameplay:

The map is quite boring, even the boss fights, the player's character 'Adrian' has no custom spells, just whirlwind/shockwave/aura of devotion. Custom spell would have made it a bit more special and more fun. There are also no game events, you just keep going forward and keep killing some random aliens. Also why do I have to learn my skills manually if I start off already being level 10? I also died when I encountered the first boss, it's pretty much impossible to kill that bug/spider, unless you actually expected me to wait 10 minutes long just to restore my hp and mp.

Terrain:

The terrain is pretty impressive, a lot of custom models have been used and it looks pretty futuristic, except for the gates, you could've used a different model, maybe a more fitting one?

Other:

*Adrian has no disabled icon
*Sudden intro
*Pan camera to Adrian after intro
*Add a preview image
*Add a map description (in editor, not on the hiveworkshop)
*You haven't imported the disabled icons of the custom icons you've imported, thus leading to green icons when you have for example the game menu open
*Adrian's passive skill has an active icon, not a passive one
*Bind the spells' hotkeys to QWER, much easier
*Improve the tooltips: Shorter, colorize them using tools
*A custom special effect for Energy Wave
*Alien Troopers don't haven an attack sound
*Add a quest entitled 'Credits', where you credit everyone from whom you have gotten the custom resources
*The guys imprisonned don't start running when you've destroyed the gates (freed them)
*Maybe add a custom UI (starcraft one from wc3c.net)
*Single Player -> file size doesn't really matter -> Maybe custom soundtrack, more custom models nad icons

Overall:

Nothing original, very lacking map, boring, no custom spells, gameplay isn't special, except for the terrain.

Rating: 1/5

If you have any questions regarding the things mentioned in my review, let me know.

 

[Djokula]

Review:

Gameplay:

The map is quite boring, even the boss fights, the player's character 'Adrian' has no custom spells, just whirlwind/shockwave/aura of devotion. Custom spell would have made it a bit more special and more fun. There are also no game events, you just keep going forward and keep killing some random aliens. Also why do I have to learn my skills manually if I start off already being level 10? I also died when I encountered the first boss, it's pretty much impossible to kill that bug/spider, unless you actually expected me to wait 10 minutes long just to restore my hp and mp.

Terrain:

The terrain is pretty impressive, a lot of custom models have been used and it looks pretty futuristic, except for the gates, you could've used a different model, maybe a more fitting one?

Other:

*Adrian has no disabled icon
*Sudden intro
*Pan camera to Adrian after intro
*Add a preview image
*Add a map description (in editor, not on the hiveworkshop)
*You haven't imported the disabled icons of the custom icons you've imported, thus leading to green icons when you have for example the game menu open
*Adrian's passive skill has an active icon, not a passive one
*Bind the spells' hotkeys to QWER, much easier
*Improve the tooltips: Shorter, colorize them using tools
*A custom special effect for Energy Wave
*Alien Troopers don't haven an attack sound
*Add a quest entitled 'Credits', where you credit everyone from whom you have gotten the custom resources
*The guys imprisonned don't start running when you've destroyed the gates (freed them)
*Maybe add a custom UI (starcraft one from wc3c.net)
*Single Player -> file size doesn't really matter -> Maybe custom soundtrack, more custom models nad icons

Overall:

Nothing original, very lacking map, boring, no custom spells, gameplay isn't special, except for the terrain.

Rating: 1/5

If you have any questions regarding the things mentioned in my review, let me know.

Gameplay:
I dont have any custiom spells on my mind atm
I still dont have any idea for events
i'll put spells learned already
Bosses fight have to be little longer atm

Terrain:
I cant find any gate that will fit this map

Other:
About disabled icons that will come later i hope
i will pan camera to adrian
i did made a preview img but it wont let me add it lol
I will add description where i can
Im not sure can i fix green icons now
I will do something about his passive icons i hope
Binding the spells,i will try
for tooltips can you recomended some tools cuz i dont know any
Im not sure what special effect to use but ill try something
I will put attack sound for alien troopers
ok ill add that quest
They are not supposed to run,atm
I dwed that ui but it was im map which i could open,cuz file was corrupted lol

Bottom line Kael my exp in this stuff is you would probbaly say low,alone i cant make something cool so im doing what i can and how i can :/

 

[Vengeancekael]

Use Quick colorizer.

 

[The_Silent]

Gate: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...oss-gate-166669/?prev=search=gate&d=list&r=20

 

[Djokula]

Gate: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...oss-gate-166669/?prev=search=gate&d=list&r=20

That gate is too small didnt found a way to make it bigger :/

 

[Djokula]

Changes will be added today i hope,some of them

 

[The_Silent]

set scale to 3.00 or 4.00

 

[Djokula]

ok will try thx

 

[-Kobas-]

Green icons, armor and damage icons are big. Gameplay is bad, hero is already max level and you didn't showed any progress you made within stats, multiboard or leaderboard.
Abilities are bad and everything is just kill and kill and kill.