Something's A'miss

[blackricc]

Well , im going to make a kind of "rpg" game but with only saveable scores and scores to buy heroes and such , but no matter that , i made this "church" or "temple" type of thing with doodas , ive tweaked and worked and got it as i liked , but i feel like something's amiss at 2 places , the center floor and the sides of a big "entrance" with a portal in the middle here's the tumbnails.

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[Spoontoobig]

WoW... terrain is bad..> But where did u get that UI ?! :O Its incredible! :<

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Way too empty, and way too spammy. Using those doodads as walls is fine, but you got to put something around them, something like columns or decoration - just make it look less monotone

 

[chilla_killa]

Yes, tell us where you got that UI from

 

[blackricc]

To be honest...i dont remember where i got the UI lol

 

[takakenji]

this is the UI http://www.wc3c.net/showthread.php?p=1117349#post1117349

 

[Dr. House]

rofl the UI is just gained from wc3 campaigns website. btw the terrain is really bad

 

[Celaquil]

doom and spoontoobig, stop being asses and give some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. In any case, rather than saying that it looks bad, I would say it looks unfinnished, with some potential. As Therewolf mentioned, you should try to fill up empty spots with interesting stuff, guessing this is supposed to be the inside of the temple? Anyways, if you really do need to have those spaces open for gameplay purposes, at least add some tile-work or some doodading that can do WITH units walking over them, like skeletons or something.

 

[Dr. House]

im not asses and most of my posts in the terrain forum are good. (in my opinion) and now to get a good post since keiji doesnt agree with it.

Your terrain needs a lot of work its flat and most of all boring maybe add som trees and rocks and make it look intresting and play a bit with height.