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Sinner

Submitted by DragunovCh
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
Sinner / "Pale Ones"

A skinny, bloody, pale, eyeless, and full of fury slave of demons. These strange creatures are summoned commonly by necromancers who want a merciless servant to protect or assist them in combat. Despite his weak and puny appearance, they have an incomparable brutality and resistance. There have also been cases where people were transformed into a sinner. Performing the Ritual of The Unclean Desire, using virgin blood, a bone calyx and a proof of a sin committed by the victim of the spell, if the conjurer never committed the sin of his victim, the victim will become a sinner.




".....In the untouched blood, the sinner despairs, because in this blood that does not know the impure act of evil and those who commit it. In this blood that the sinner can't corrupt. In this blood the one who have his blood stained with the darkness of the sin must know his new fate as dirty blood and son of evil itself, falling on him the wicked punishment of his acts ..." -Sentence of the Ritual Of The Unclean Desire, performing the bath of the sin)


v1.0 Uploaded
v1.1: Added few details (blood and shadows)
v1.2 Oops!
v.1.3 Darkened, added some detail to the light/shadows some parts are more darker than others, made a contour line, unblurried (kinda)
v.1.4 Added nipple ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), removed the back bruises so he no longer have a double purple thing in his back
v.1.5 Reshaded, added some details and recolor, remarked some blurry lines, darkened a bit the skin so it would stop being a shiny spot in the middle of the night, changed screenshot (hope it gets approved this time :C)
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  1. Kyrbi0

    Kyrbi0

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    Nice description.
     
  2. Lovely description, nice outcome but it lacks the following.
    -Detailing
    -Shading
    -More gore (That goes to No.1)
     
  3. you still lack effort by the looks of the picture.
     
  4. Heinvers

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    Moderator comment:

    Your texture is eerie and horrific looking. Not bad. What your skin lacks are proper shading and complimentary highlights to make it fit in-game nicely. Currently it is very bright and looks like a blob next to other vanilla textures.

    It is quite blurred and the details seem washed by the monochromatic theme. It could use more brush work and sharpness.

    For now, I will send this to Substandard/Too Simple section until further update. If you have question and/or would like this re-moderated, feel free to message me or make a thread in the Staff Contact section.
     
  5. Misha

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    hm.. instead of really white, why don't you try making it a very pale ivory color, or that of slightly yellow teeth? both are a kind of a slight tint, that i'm sure would benefit the texture more
     
  6. DragunovCh

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    would do that in no time but im not even nearby home :( when i return i'll make some changes to improve it
     
  7. ~Nightmare

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    You need to shade the bones more properly because as of now it looks very flat looking with no definite light source. Take for example some of the ingame skeleton model textures for references