Shrine of Azshara

[FibSaSk]

Hello all,
I am a very new terrainer and this is my first terrain which i made in about 15 minutes.I uploaded it here so that people get an idea for their naga maps and to see your critism on how to make it better.
Don` t be very bad with me

 

[thedeathunterxx]

well for your first terrain, its an average piece.

I suggest for you to keep observing other terrainers on the terrain forum to help become a better terrainer. Keep trying.

to improve this piece. I advise changing the camera angle, include the sky and start using the UTM , which you can find right here on the terrain forum.

 

[Belgarath]

don't put titles/names on the terrain
just something, underwater shrooms?

 

[Nbah]

The camera isn't too great, experiment with it. More enviroment like underwater grass thing or some kind of rock/corals. The mushrooms look very out of place and the whole spammy feeling is bleh. I'd suggest to add more sophisticated architecture there or some kind of rocks. The force field thing looks bad, IMO. You should also have more tile variation.

 

[FibSaSk]

@ thedeathunterxx: I made this terrain from the UTM btw i did this in 15 minutes, thanks for the advice.

@Belgarath: The main thing of this terrain is the temples, the statues and the columns, i added those mushrooms only for some more decoration, but i shouldnt place them and add more temple stuff

@Nbah: Thanks for the critism, i`ll care what you said next time....

 

[Gilles]

Looks entirely random. What is it even supposed to be?

 

[2-P]

What is it even supposed to be?

Probably the Shrine of Azshara.