I really hope it's okay to make a story out of something related to everyday life, instead of just Warcraft Lore.
Well, out of boredom and the fact that I have to practice for my English Examinations tomorrow, I decided to write a really short and simple story, please do correct me and comment on my mistakes too:
The Little Ant
The classroom bell jingled like a silly elephant. Little Johnny (Typical simple story name) bolted out of the door and darted towards the school cafeteria as if he had just robbed a bank. That day, being French Fry Friday, he just could not abstain from settling his oodles of taste buds into the crunchy, golden texture of French Fries. When he arrived as the earliest customer queuing at the Western Food Stall, he discovered, to his dismay, that the vendor was still busy whipping up the final batch of fries. This left Little Johnny biding fervently in front of the stall, not knowing how to enliven himself.
At that very moment, something minuscule had caught his attention. It was a little red ant. On quotidian occasions, an ant would usually be of no significance. However, on this prosaic point of time, he noticed that the ant was making its way towards a platter of fries which were already done. At first, he felt like squishing it like any other bug (Due to the fact that it was attempting to steal fries he was about to pop into his mouth sooner or later), but the ant did something which interested him. It was attempting to carry a massive fry (Compared to itself), but couldn't seem to do so, it then started to communicate with some of its fellow friends nearby to aid him in his plight. The whole process was lucid, yet astounding, as Little Johnny watched helplessly while one of his soon-to-be-eaten-by-him fries was soon to be eaten by little ants. Thoughts flooded his mind. He was pondering over how even little ants seem to overcome everyday problems with some help and the fact that there were many people who assisted him while he was having trouble with the 'Fries' of life.
"Oh, It's you again Johnny. The fries are done, by the way." The vendor mentioned as she handed a plate of fries over to Little Johnny while he gave her the money.
"Thank you." Little Johnny uttered. The vendor was thrown aback at his sudden gesture of politeness, but later managed a smile.
The loud echoes of chattering from the hallway signaled for Little Johnny to grab a seat before the rest of the famished students do. He had just learnt something new, and it wasn't because his teachers forced him to.
- Miss_Foxy
Well, this is the first time I've ever posted a story online, and I really hope that some of you would review it and give me a grade. Please do tell me my mistakes and ways to correct them to, I'd love to be prepared for my exams
Thank you!
Well, out of boredom and the fact that I have to practice for my English Examinations tomorrow, I decided to write a really short and simple story, please do correct me and comment on my mistakes too:
The Little Ant
The classroom bell jingled like a silly elephant. Little Johnny (Typical simple story name) bolted out of the door and darted towards the school cafeteria as if he had just robbed a bank. That day, being French Fry Friday, he just could not abstain from settling his oodles of taste buds into the crunchy, golden texture of French Fries. When he arrived as the earliest customer queuing at the Western Food Stall, he discovered, to his dismay, that the vendor was still busy whipping up the final batch of fries. This left Little Johnny biding fervently in front of the stall, not knowing how to enliven himself.
At that very moment, something minuscule had caught his attention. It was a little red ant. On quotidian occasions, an ant would usually be of no significance. However, on this prosaic point of time, he noticed that the ant was making its way towards a platter of fries which were already done. At first, he felt like squishing it like any other bug (Due to the fact that it was attempting to steal fries he was about to pop into his mouth sooner or later), but the ant did something which interested him. It was attempting to carry a massive fry (Compared to itself), but couldn't seem to do so, it then started to communicate with some of its fellow friends nearby to aid him in his plight. The whole process was lucid, yet astounding, as Little Johnny watched helplessly while one of his soon-to-be-eaten-by-him fries was soon to be eaten by little ants. Thoughts flooded his mind. He was pondering over how even little ants seem to overcome everyday problems with some help and the fact that there were many people who assisted him while he was having trouble with the 'Fries' of life.
"Oh, It's you again Johnny. The fries are done, by the way." The vendor mentioned as she handed a plate of fries over to Little Johnny while he gave her the money.
"Thank you." Little Johnny uttered. The vendor was thrown aback at his sudden gesture of politeness, but later managed a smile.
The loud echoes of chattering from the hallway signaled for Little Johnny to grab a seat before the rest of the famished students do. He had just learnt something new, and it wasn't because his teachers forced him to.
- Miss_Foxy
Well, this is the first time I've ever posted a story online, and I really hope that some of you would review it and give me a grade. Please do tell me my mistakes and ways to correct them to, I'd love to be prepared for my exams
Thank you!