Ruined Tower

[-Kobas-]

I was creating terrain for my RPG and I created something like this one!
Now I need Loading Screen, here are few choices

Tell me what you think?

Picture 1

First one... Strong fog, bad angle (waterfalls look bad this way) and some other bad things!

But still is 2 light I need dark one, RPG is about demons

Picture 2

Another one
Much darker, and I add whole tower into cave like environment!
This way fog is darker but not so strong

Still I don't like few stuff, tell me yours

It's sad because I can't use all models and textures (like on this picture) in my RPG but some main are already there

 

[fladdermasken]

Looks really cool, I love the idea. I don't fully understand the waterfalls though, seems like the water is springing from the rocks. Also the left corner looks a tad bit empty. Nice job nevertheless.

 

[-Kobas-]

Because you didn't saw everything created, I must change angle then or do something about it, there is small lake, more like fountain inside of tower

Empty just to show some ground
Any suggestions, what to add there?

 

[Vengeancekael]

TOO MUCH LIGHTING, AHHH MY EYES!!!
But other than that, awesome.
But also fix those holes in the water etc.

EDIT: Also remove those animals perhaps? I mean like, what the hell? Animals living on a 24x24 island?

EDIT: Also the highest waterfall is weird... Where is the water coming from? :S

 

[-Kobas-]

I try yellow, green, blue and this gray lightning!
Last one was best one for me

Kael get

I like it this way

 

[~Void~]

Too much fog. And the fog's bright white.

 

[-Kobas-]

Too much fog. And the fog's bright white.

Water looked bad at map edge so I used strong fog to remove that glitch

 

[Oziris]

The light goes threw the tree. :S Weird and the highest waterfall, i mean really where is the water coming from? >.>
Edit: Might i ask how did you make that light come from those rocks?. I never knew how to make that kind light. >.>

 

[Dr. House]

From this point of view the waterfalls make no sence and besides that you need to work on the fog but i most say besides those things i love it

This is what DR.House calls a Chocolate Cookie!

 

[-Kobas-]

The light goes threw the tree. :S

Can't be created in some another way, I can only delete it or reduce size...

Weird and the highest waterfall, i mean really where is the water coming from? >.>

Read this

Edit: Might i ask how did you make that light come from those rocks?. I never knew how to make that kind light. >.>

Use lightning from above model

 

[Solaris]

I really like it, but indeed the light is too bright and you can see where the light circle ends above one of the trees in the middle.
If you make the water visible from where the waterfalls origins and change the light its almost perfect.

 

[~Void~]

Water looked bad at map edge so I used strong fog to remove that glitch

And ruined the rest of the map in the process, lol.

 

[-Kobas-]

And ruined the rest of the map in the process, lol.

Ha ha

Well I just needed loading screen for my RPG
Well I will work even more then, expect new picture soon

RPG

 

[Belgarath]

Water looked bad at map edge so I used strong fog to remove that glitch

extend the map?
use different water?

the sun and the fog don't really match well, the sun is glaringly white while the fog is like.. grey. the waterfalls make no sense at all to be honest, they just kind of spring up randomly. also i'd use different grass for the grassy bits. the grass x is terrible :- )

 

[Cihparg]

I can't see the first picture, so I sent smilies.

 

[-Kobas-]

I don't know why....
Well check attached one it's same

 

[Cihparg]

Ahaa!! Looks pretty nice, but I can see end of the world

 

[Pharaoh_]

It's still nice :]

 

[-Kobas-]

Thanks guys

 

[~Void~]

You could always set the start Z of the fog to be further back, that way we could at least see what's in front of us more clearly. You could also extend the map, if you haven't already, or you could put any text you want for the loading screen over the horizon so we can't see it.

 

[Oziris]

Ahaa!! Looks pretty nice, but I can see end of the world

Huh? You cant see the end of the world. Have you ever seen the ocean in real life? >.>

Oh noes, tha 3nd of tha worldzzz!!
http://lifeboat.com/images/blue.ocean.jpg

 

[Belgarath]

Huh? You cant see the end of the world. Have you ever seen the ocean in real life? >.>

Oh noes, tha 3nd of tha worldzzz!!
http://lifeboat.com/images/blue.ocean.jpg

it looks a bit different in wc3 terrains, not to mention the complications of stuff that might happen if you know what i mean

 

[-Kobas-]

Another one is uploaded*, so tell me what you think

*check first post...

 

[Deolrin]

The second is really nice, but makes no sense whatsoever to me. Who would build a tower... In a cave? I understand the tower might be ancient and the water might have gotten there later, but why is it is inside a cave? I don't believe it's old enough to be built before the place was a cave?

 

[-Kobas-]

Dude why human paladin carry hammer 2 times bigger than himself

Maybe that one was some magic tower, or ancient gateway to another world or dimension...

I need time because I work alone on RPG, but when time come, you will understand all

 

[elredir]

second one is much much better
but i think you should continue the island to the left of the screen making it look like its connected to a larger land mass but that just my opinion ...

what you should definitely do is to work more on the background make to waterfalls look better/more attractive...(i think i see an waterfall going straight trough a rock ,you could make it that the water molds on the rock and pours down(i dont think i described very well))

another thing that i dont like are those waterfalls coming out of the tower..i dont know i would say to make some cavities from witch the water comes out or make the waterfalls smaller/thinner so that it gives the impression that the water comes out of tiny cracks

and probably tint those lily pads darker so it matches the surrounding environment
hope this was of some help

 

[Vengeancekael]

Nice nice, keep up the good work.

 

[noxwinslol]

Actually the lighting is nice, its just that the rock textures are a bit too pixelated, therefor i suggest you make higher quality textures :3

 

[-Kobas-]

Map itself is about 50 MB, how higher textures should be