River Terrain

[Moderator]

22:59, 19th Nov 2013
Orcnet: Lacking map description

 

[Binsu]

Downloading and while you are at it, it is clearly stated in the Rules that map should have no name of "Just Another Warcraft III map" so what I suggest is that you change the map's name into something that is interesting.

 

[Shinzen_Subz]

Downloading and while you are at it, it is clearly stated in the Rules that map should have no name of "Just Another Warcraft III map" so what I suggest is that you change the map's name into something that is interesting.

Oh I'm sorry I forgot (apologize)
hehehe I'm little bit such an idiot
anyway i update that already
although its a little ugly terrain to upload
haven't you try to download it?
if you do I'm so really great full

 

[polardude]

also make a better description. exp. tell more about the map.

 

[Binsu]

No need to apologize and Please do what polardude above has said. Descriptions does not require to be complex but just provide some brief description into it, optional but if you want some screenshots from the terrain and most likely credits because it is a way to give thanks to those users who you have used a resources into your map.

By the way, had a look on the terrain, it looks good though its more of a terrain showcase and an unplayable one, there is a difference between a showcase and a template. A template has free spaces to be used or adopt by others on their maps while showcase is most likely not playable though there are some that are playable. Also, don't base the moon from the Draagonhawk Rider unit instead base it on a doodad, same goes for the bright effect in the terrain.

To sum it up, it does not qualify for a template and just a showcase to be honest. Your terrain is good though its not playable enough for users to find some uses for it, maybe for short gameplay, there are chances this can be used. Suggestions are give some more spaces on the terrain, remove the moon and bright effect props there for they are only suitable for showcase types of terrains, they will not benefit much on templates. Brotip, Consider the template's usefulness also to the community, it helps you to decide of a better template map!

Hope you do not see this as a hateful comment but a comment for you to improve at some points. Good day.

 

[Shinzen_Subz]

yes I will
to be honest I'm new here and I'm not professional
so I need some advice from the experts
your tip is very useful
I start to fix it again...
anyway I'm so really lucky that many people
advice me and be a mentor for me as you did guys
suggestions are acceptable and I accept the complaints
Actually I'm reading some tutorials here
hehehehe thank you guys
dont worry ill fix it

 

[Binsu]

Good to hear that, I hope you will give us some more updates of this.