1. There is no map description at lobby screen.
2. the custom music and game music occur at the same time and it sounds horrid
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3. when you see a battleship and need to tell someone as fast as u can, U DONT GO "hi!
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have u ever seen anyone be ina rush, and then stop. and start with. "hi.
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4. omg it is taking him 4 cinametic lines to cut to the chase... he isnt in that much of a hurry for someone who "needs" to tell them.
5. i am sorry but god... the lines. this feels like a bad comedy at first.
6. the kid is talking way too unintelligently for his height. Perhaps he should be made shorter.
7. for a guy with a horse, he does an awful lot of running.
8. again the custom music is horrible when it is played at the same time as the normal music.
9. BLOODY BOAT! OMG! ... insanely unimaginative yet i couldnt help bursting out in laughter. soooo cheesy, yet it feels like that was the intention.
10. i love the terrain job. everywhere u go it feels like it is what it is intended to be. home feels like a home, village feels like a village, and the tavern feels like a tavern. even with the spooky cloak guy in the corner.
11. oh. it seems the spooky guy is important.
12. the time frame between him walking in and getting to the bar was only a few seconds. A cloaked guy staring at u for a few seconds doesnt qualify as spooky.
13. nvm, seems that is part of the story.
14. the cinametic line about the mystery man having a drink alone should be 2 seconds longer
15. the big soldier based on SpellBreaker should be a smidgen shorter. he looks like he is a foot or two taller in RL.
16. why doesnt he take his family with him?! QQ not much of a father leaving his family behind for life.
17. again, for a guy who owns a horse... he does a LOT of walking!
18. i burst out laughing at the guards discussion about the gate xD
19. Dukes Haven is run by Duke... that was imaginative.
20. plus Dukes Hold.
21. thats right. call the first old guy u see a duke. That works.
22. "normally i must bust you but ill let u slide this once." this luck related stuff is overdone in fantasy. gotta tell ya... make it more based on his mood. maybe he had a good lunch or had his feet rubbed 5 min ago.
23. A GUY WHO IS IN TROUBLE DOES NOT GO "whoops, sorry." that is something a child would say. an adult would be something like "my apologies" and then the duke would go "now, what did u want?" and then the guy would say what he wants.
24. "you MUST join cuz of your age"... that is either an insult to the guy, or the duke is a complete dumbass. because at that rate spys and criminals could get in just by being at a certain age.
25. u go from "sure u can join" positive atmopshere to "SEIZE HIM" the next moment? either that has no reason behind it or the duke has mood swings worse than a pregnant woman.
26. i find it amusing how he runs away, from nothing. seriously, there is nothing chasing him.
27. the sailor at the drop of a hat allows a stranger to join his friendship circle.
28. throwing 10 lives away so 2 can run... that crew is suicidal.
29. i do like the sailors lines. they are so... stupid XD