Rise of the Empire: Part I

[Moderator]

15:39, 31st Jul 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[MultiGod]

donloading......., while saving place for teh 1st post.
EDIT : nice.

 

[Papawhiffle]

May I ask why is this so much space?

 

[Kaderan]

hmmm kinda strange .... but well what can i loose he?

 

[Kaderan]

HOOLY cat shit this rules m8!

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the Group Map Reviewers, I will be reviewing campaigns/cinematics :

Review - Rise of the Empire: Part I A cinematic by GrandDukeAdense Camera : The camera work is ok, however you should try to make the camera to constantly move. Also watching the cinematic from above isn't so good. Terrain : The environment does look good, however there are some too flat spots. Story : The story can be a bit interesting, but the bad long dialogues just make it boring. Also the ending is a bit weird, at least fade out and then also post the credits. Animations : You didn't use any animations in the conversations. Other : There are typos in the cinematic. There are grammar mistakes in the cinematic. Hiveworkshop : You have broken a rule, you must post the credits in the description. Overall : The cinematic is ok, I suggest you update this again to improve it. Final Rating : 2/5