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[Moderator]

20:07, 17th Jul 2014
BPower:
I recommend you check some other approved resources and get familiar with the spell submission ruleset.
A tutorial about proper indexing could also be very useful.
Rejected, because this far too simple, still including a lot of critical issues like location leaks.

 

[The Colossus]

Please do not criticize if you do not like me because it is my first spell pack

 

[BPower]

Please add the triggers (GUI) or script (JASS/vJass) into the spell description.
The correct BB-code is [trigger][/trigger] or [code=jass][/code]. To keep everything clean and readable the [hidden=""][/hidden] is also very useful.

 

[Tank-Commander]

Please do not criticize if you do not like me because it is my first spell pack

Being a first resource doesn't exempt one of criticism, eitherway these spells are all object editor based and don't use any triggers other than for some effects.

The extent of the triggers are these:

Triggers

• GS
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Begins casting an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Genetic shield
  • Actions
    • Unit - Create 1 Genetic dummy for Neutral Passive at (Position of (Triggering unit)) facing (Facing of (Triggering unit)) degrees
    • Unit - Add a 2.00 second Generic expiration timer to (Last created unit)

• Flame Spin
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Begins casting an ability
  • Conditions
    • (Ability being cast) Equal to Flame Spin
  • Actions
    • For each (Integer A) from 1 to 10, do (Actions)
      • Loop - Actions
        • Special Effect - Create a special effect at ((Position of (Casting unit)) offset by 400.00 towards ((Real((Integer A))) x 40.00) degrees) using Abilities\Spells\Human\FlameStrike\FlameStrike1.mdl

As short as these are, they're also not exempt of errors, specifically leaking is a notable one, location leaks, where you create the special effects and when you create the dummy unit, I suggest viewing a few tutorials on spellmaking

We also don't approve object editor based abilities unless they're incredible, and even then it's difficult to get approval

Edit: Tooltips are also incorrect/poorly done, that's another thing to work on

 

[The Colossus]

I notice that I can now recognize the mistakes made ​​in my first eh spell pack and good as it is one basic thanks for telling me and notify me of certain errors pack.