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I think I'll make an icon out of it 
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instead of using white for highlights and black for shading try using a lighter color similar to your character's skin tone and the highlight and for shading use a darker color similar to your character's skin tone
Also, there are a lot of dark lines that dont really make sense and your placing a lot of your highlights right next to areas you shaded. Most of the time you want a gradual change from light to dark.
There is a line going through his pecs that should be fixed
Your triceps should be kind of parallel to your character's deltoids (shoulder) not directly beneath and the line defining them is generally placed kind of on the side more towards the back.
There are weird oval shaped muscles on the left side i would suggest redoing that and using a picture for reference
The light source for your character's abs are coming from the bottom while the light source for the rest of your character seems to be top right which brings me to my next point which is if the sun is behind the character then you should shade him accordingly
Finally the eyebrows are in a surprised expression right now and the ears are really small