Raining Beach

[Deep Sea Kraken]

This is the first terrain I've made [the first really good terrain anyway] there are probably alot of thing wrong with it , but i did make it half an hour at 6 in the morning after staying up all night no dont be supprised. Tell me what you think, and if you would like to use it in a map let me know. I got everything to be that dark by setting the lighting to Dungeon.

-Deep Sea Kraken

 

[Darkey]

It looks a little flat, maybe add some fishes. Some shrubs at the trees wouldn't hurt either.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

New Pics

O.K. here are the new pics; the old ones were too small [too hard 2 see details] <--- looks like the clown guy in twisted metal.

 

[HernanG]

Try not to double post, plz.

Hmm, looks messy, those cliff vines dont look good...
Add fog, i will look 100% better.

Its good, but not the best.

U should use a bit of tile variation here and there, and height variation in the coast.

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

kk sorry about double post. it is the first one I've done [map that is], and the vines are covering up spots where I couldnt get the editor to make a ramp [it looks alot worse otherwise] ah well, Ill see what I can do. I do have some tile variation, its just you cant see it from those angles [and I think it would look stupid having grass under-water or tiles underwater, since its supposed 2 b a beach]. Well Ill see what happens.

 

[operator]

You should smooth out the edges

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Okay. How are these? As you can see i changed alot, but I have a problem: I want to make the fog thicker, but I cant make it get any thicker. I even set the Fog Density to 100 [up from .5] maybe you can help?

 

[operator]

Looks better, but the palmes seem so out of place..Try adding more green around them

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Yeah i see your point.

 

[demonsofdante]

what with the flying fish? its quite the mind boggler lol. try using rocks, small escarpments, somethign to brighten it up. Beaches are cool in real life, but kind of bland in warcraft unless you add some more variety to it

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Ok how are these? The unit I put in for Scale. If the trees are too big let me know. I was going for a realistic feeling. I tried to fix the fish too and hopefully i did.

 

[operator]

Looking way better now Though you should revome those little dots of grass

 

[Ham Ham]

Its geting beter
4/5

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

YAY finally. allowed me to upload pics

 

[Kalvorod]

Dsk

Deep Sea Kraken, meet Terror. PWNED

-- MTG RULES

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

What are you talking about?

 

[The_wand_mirror]

ARGH SCREENSHOT ERROR?? i cant see them..

 

[Herio-san]

Not bad for your first terrain. Its still a little messy looking though. Try adding some shorter doodads into the water and moving the taller ones back to along the shoreline.
Might also want to add some rocks from the sunken ruins tileset and some lillypads. Also, things like cattails tend to grow more along a shoreline.
Pretty good though 3/5
Clean it up a bit and smooth out the edges, maybe add some rock and it'll look awesome.