QuilboarWatchTower

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15:04, 23rd Jan 2014
Kwaliti:

Too small changes to be considered approvable.

 

[ma5t3r d3ath]

Seems a lot like orcs towers

 

[Sunreaver]

Add more things to make it unique 2/5

 

[InfernalTater]

It isn't changed enough to be considered your model, sorry.

 

[Wa666r]

Too Bland. You could add make work with maybe some spikes, or stone from the barren.

 

[Kimbo]

I think you need to add thorns or some more bone-like animalistic nature to it

 

[Kyrbi0]

It isn't changed enough to be considered your model, sorry.

Exactly. Edge45, think about the Quillboars & their history, location, lore and construction knowledge would get them in terms of building design. Ask yourself a series of questions:

• Where do they live?
• How do they live?
• What are their natural resources (for making buildings; wood, leather, stones, adobe?, etc)?
• What other resources do they have (for adorning buildings; bones, sticks, leather, quill-boar spikes!!, totems, blood/runes, etc)?

To me, the answer to those questions will guide you on designing their architecture. In my mind (I'll admit, don't know much about Quillboars except = "boar-men"), they aren't very smart or tall or dexterous... Probably crudely-constructed, low huts (no advanced engineering here). Adorned with blood, skulls, maybe outgrown Quillboar spines (ooh, I like that). Strange pig-like totems and drawings. Scrapped leather and rusted armor. Etc.

Also consider what the tower would shoot. Is it a Quillboar (ostensibly) inside? Does he shoot spines? Or throw rocks? Or toss spears? Etc.

~~~

Seriously, looking at your other works, you got potential. Just engage your imagination and really study out what this race is all about (or for anything you make). Keep it up.

 

[Edge45]

I kinda accept comments

Exactly. Edge45, think about the Quillboars & their history, location, lore and construction knowledge would get them in terms of building design. Ask yourself a series of questions:
Where do they live?
How do they live?
What are their natural resources (for making buildings; wood, leather, stones, adobe?, etc)?
What other resources do they have (for adorning buildings; bones, sticks, leather, quill-boar spikes!!, totems, blood/runes, etc)?

To me, the answer to those questions will guide you on designing their architecture. In my mind (I'll admit, don't know much about Quillboars except = "boar-men"), they aren't very smart or tall or dexterous... Probably crudely-constructed, low huts (no advanced engineering here). Adorned with blood, skulls, maybe outgrown Quillboar spines (ooh, I like that). Strange pig-like totems and drawings. Scrapped leather and rusted armor. Etc.

Also consider what the tower would shoot. Is it a Quillboar (ostensibly) inside? Does he shoot spines? Or throw rocks? Or toss spears? Etc.

~~~

Seriously, looking at your other works, you got potential. Just engage your imagination and really study out what this race is all about (or for anything you make). Keep it up.

Thanks Kyrbi0 for your speech? or comment

 

[FUJI]

It is like a watch tower (

 

[Skypsi]

Change the actual main structure or at least re-skin it, the only things you changed could be added in game with in-game assets using abilities/triggers. Also It would be more size efficient to make everything you added a single attachment for the watchtower. This is the same thing as adding a tree and some flowers to a town-hall and calling it a new building.

 

[HuanJuan]

From the picture of the tower, I can imagine that in a night elvish forest.

 

[Tryndamere]

Not bad, I quite like the concept of the tower wrapped around the roots