Prisoners Escapes v.1

[Moderator]

07:02, 5th Jul 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected

 

[Slead]

Sorry For My Bad English

 

[light bolt30]

Keep screenshots under hidden tags. You may want someone to go through the map and check for spelling mistakes since there is already a few in your description; locale, unites, denger, delivEred.

 

[MagiC_AntO.]

Could be a little part of one campaign or like a funny mini Games ...

 

[-BLOOD_BATH-]

Oh yes I can see you are bad english from the "Story"
Story
:A Big Castle Has Been Used As A Base In The Paste Now He is A Jail For The Must Dengurous Criminal And Gangster In The World Now They Have Been Delivred By An Evil Corporation To Use them as Shock Troopers For Ther Evil Mission
Hmmm... maybe should :
-A big castle has been used as a base in the past. Now it is a jail for the most dangerous criminal and gangster in the world. Now they have been delivered by an Evil Corporation to use them as Shock Troopers for their Evil Mission.
I don't know it's true or not, but at least you can add "dot" (.).
Anyway, will test it soon.
Good luck in your project!

 

[Slead]

Thank you for corecting my mistake

 

[RaijinSpark]

Prisoners Escapes

• Author: FreeWayLemon
• Type: Escape / Maze
• Category: Modern Warfare
• Map Size: 128x128
• Playable Map Size: 116x116
• Suggested Players: ???
• Tileset: IceCrown

Played this map alone 3 times, at first I got busted for 4 kodo units chasing me, and for second and third I finished the game without encountering enemies.

-Add more in the terrain, it's a little bit boring, just trees and buildings, maybe you can make it more like half of the map is inside the prison you'll have to get out of there first before going to the outside world.
-You should make some criminal-themed items, cigarettes, guns etc.
-Add more units in the map but not too close to each other or you'll have dozens of them chasing you.
-Don't use unrelated resources to your map, like the kodo, you should try getting other good models, hive's model section offers you tons of them.
-Don't make those towers and fences big since they won't be seen unless you go near them (got my point?) since they are too big they disappear when your far from them.

[+] Nice and unique idea
[-] Bad model used for some units (ex. Kodo)
[-] No items, all heroes have same skills, this what makes the map boring, no strategic gameplay.
[-] There is an area where there lots of units, there is also an area where there are no units. which makes the game hard or easy at times.
[-] Terrain is too plain.
[-] The game can be finished without encountering enemies if you are picky with your path, or you can die immediately by making a mistake, like going to place with 4-5 kodos waiting to bust you.

• Gameplay: 4/10 A bit boring, since there's no really effort on the terrain all you do is just walk there and walk here, avoid/fight enemies.
• Originality: 7/10 It's my first time seeing a prison-related maps, it's a unique idea, but overall the map should still be improved.
• Creativity: 3/10 Terrain is too plain, just some big trees placed at random areas and is flat, I like the model you used in the prisoners.
• Description: 5/10 I don't like your description, first off, don't Use Capitalization, lack of information (add something like credits, etc.), and please use spoiler tags for the screenshots.
• Rules: 0/10 No credits was given, you abide a THW rule.
• Total: 19

1~10 Voted for rejection. Map isn't worth posting.
11~20 Could use a lot of improvements.
21~30 It isn't that bad. Do some minor improvements.
31~40 Map is good, Keep up the good work.
41~49 Map is very good and decent, Highly Recommended.
50 Director's Cut

 

[Slead]

thanks for your comment and i will update it soon

 

[RaijinSpark]

np, I'm glad I'm helping mappers through my review.

 

[XPQJ]

Wasn't very good in my eyes but here are things to fix

Suggestions

Map Name Fix: Prisoner(s?) Escape

To begin with, the English in this map was generally pretty off. It needs a good helping of proofreading before you can appeal to the English audiences.

Heroes need to be stronger, hotkeys need to be fixed, new abilities need to be added, and the heroes can't all be exactly the same, and credits need to be given for the abilities.

Enemies should be more frequent but also killable, and your terrain needs to include elevation and other obstacles that prevent it being a straight shot to the goal.

Overall, this map needs a lot of work to become playable and entertaining.

 

[Slead]

thats right i have to Fix alote of thing anyway,thank you for your time im working on the map i hope it will be more apriciated in the next update.

Note: Rate Please, and give suggetions if you play it and if some one have the time to help me on my english that will be awsome,thanks!

 

[RaijinSpark]

my opinions and suggestions are posted in my review..

see my post above.

 

[Orcnet]

could you please describe more about your work? tells us more about the game. its systems, features, screenshots, and not at least, credits.

by using these BB codes and Templates for us to understand your map properly.

 

[eubz]

Where did you get those models? they're good,... Are they all yours?