[Picture] Arrival at the wetlands After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally ca

[Phoonix]

Arrival at the wetlands

After a week of sailing and staring at old maps land finally came into sight, their destination was reached. The strongholds they would erect on this land would be symbols of destruction and fear, they would lay low for some time and then they would appear, mighty and strong...

 

[AIagremm]

Dude, seriously, could you please be more careful in descriptions? Seriously, its not chat, type slowly and throughroughly.
Wetlands are capitalized, After is beginning of a sentance, capitalize too, The strongholds, same.
Come on, description is half of the pic and you ruin it =/

 

[chr2]

Trees look too unnatural. They are on straight lines, which they wouldn't be in the nature. Aside from that, great pic.

 

[Phoonix]

oO what? they aren't on straight lines at all! and all... grammar nazi... xD but now honestly there weren't that many mistakes.

 

[StormWarriors2]

Yeah the pic's description is pretty small for the pic >.>
Otherwise good pic.

 

[VeljkoM]

Size doesn't mater for text. It maters if it informs people who read it. And what Chr meant I guess is that all trees look that they are same height and size. Only 2-3 tress on the right look different then the rest.

 

[Phoonix]

blame the lack of fitting models for that.

 

[VeljkoM]

Actually you could have just made some trees bigger, others smaller, lower them down etc...

 

[Phoonix]

i did.

 

[Tleno]

You should have paged Up/Down some of them, and change their scale...

 

[Phoonix]

like i said to Velj i did.