Pharaoh_'s "Connection of the Worlds" (1st terraining attempt)

[Pharaoh_]

"Connection of the Worlds": Well, for the result, it's a bit 'too much', but my aim was to show that not all of the underground tunnels lead to smelly places By the way, it's my first attempt, be kind...!

 

[Volvox]

Though the theme is a bit odd, you've either read through lots of terraining threads or you're really talented(both could do fine). Very nice use of light from above model, it makes the whole thing look mystical and nicer.

 

[raid1000]

well theres something new
i like the concept
those sewer pipes are kinda strange, i think they should be going paralel to the tunel not perpendicular to it
+rep

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Since it looks like a normal road way, the gunk pipes look random. Nice attempt anyways!

 

[thegreatsmite]

YOUR a LIAR, no way this is your actuall first. its pretty good but i dont like the pipes. i tihnk you should just make the cave-like place overgrown.

 

[Pharaoh_]

Oh, thanks guys for the comments.
@thegreatsmite, i swear to God, it is pure first attempt with no one's help. I thank though, because it means it is good to doubt me that way.
Thank you all!

 

[c00l3ztgur1]

i wish for more... xD

 

[~Void~]

It's good, you've definitely got potential, but there are a lot of small awkward bits. For example the pipes, the giant boring arch, and model choices.

 

[Gilles]

I usually tell people not to post their first work... you're allowed to.

It's not perfect, you should make the tunnel part contrast with the rest of the terrain more. That would help the pipes "fit in". As well, make the pipes much larger.