Onix

[Moderator]

18:14, 22nd Nov 2008
Pyritie: Yeah, it's better. You still reeaaally need to add some shading. And if you don't want to add shading, add some texture to those rocks so they aren't solid gray!
Oh, and I'd make those dust particles Blend, not Additive. And make them brown.

9th Dec 2008
Pyritie: Changes (finally) made, resource approved.

 

[Delaguthix]

I'm really sorry, But the Face makes me lol so much. The rest is good though so great job. 3/5

 

[Arvedui]

Like I said on the other forum, the face needs fixing. Other than that it's fine.

 

[Zerox]

Okay the face needs fixing but what the heck does that mean? I think the face is fine. >.< If your talking about the line on his face on the upper pic of him that is just a shadow that looks weird at that angle. And come on not even one comment after a day about how beautiful the animations are? Lord_T did a beautiful job on them making this model a billion times better.

 

[Devine]

what a massive polycount compared to what it is D:
also ... the texture is to monotone.
Show us some dirt on the rocks.
Oh and Pokemon phails :3

 

[Ghost765]

POKEMON! gotta rape em alll. its ok.

 

[Misha]

Lol the head should be flatened a bit Zerox ^^

 

[Zerox]

what a massive polycount compared to what it is D:
also ... the texture is to monotone.
Show us some dirt on the rocks.
Oh and Pokemon phails :3

Uh 840 isn't that much dude. The limit is something like 2000 besides your only going to have like 1 or 2 of these things in most cases so its not an issue in the slightest. For the texture to remain extremely small in size as it is currently the rock texture will stay somewhat bland. Besides if you look at Onix in other things such as

Pokemon Stadium: *woops* It was a tripod image. I'll get a new one.

A regular picture by nintendo:

And a Pokemon Card:

he has always been simple in coloring. I don't intend to change that any because that isn't how onix is.

gotta rape em alll.

Perverted = phail. T.T

 

[Misha]

what a massive polycount compared to what it is D:
also ... the texture is to monotone.
Show us some dirt on the rocks.
Oh and Pokemon phails :3

what what? i think i should say this:
"you no take candle?"

xD

 

[Fasian_guy]

i thnk its ok...not as good as ur othe modeles

 

[Ghost765]

i aint perverted. thats what ash rape'em is.

 

[Zerox]

i aint perverted. thats what ash rape'em is.

I pity you that you would know of such a disturbing thing. Its sad what the world has come to these days. Is nothing sacred?

 

[Arvedui]

Okay the face needs fixing but what the heck does that mean? I think the face is fine. >.< If your talking about the line on his face on the upper pic of him that is just a shadow that looks weird at that angle. And come on not even one comment after a day about how beautiful the animations are? Lord_T did a beautiful job on them making this model a billion times better.

Didn't mean to offend you Zerox Of course Lord_T did an awesome job, he's Lord_T I didn't think it needed to be said.

Anyway, the face needs fixing in this: It doesn't look like Onix. The face/snout is too elongated. Onix has a "short" snout and your model has a long one.

Also, the horn is tilted to the front too much. Onix's horn is pointed straight up. But I don't find that to be as big a deal as the long head.

That's what I think is wrong with the face.

The texture is too light (or bright) for my liking, but that's not that big of a deal to me.

I pity you that you would know of such a disturbing thing. Its sad what the world has come to these days. Is nothing sacred?

Apparently not

 

[Ghost765]

finding something sacred outside of a relgious place is like...finding a virgin.

 

[Devine]

...still the face has a hole in it and the texture needs work.

 

[Misha]

finding something sacred outside of a relgious place is like...finding a virgin.

no, i am not a pokemon fan.

be good =3

~Misha~

EDIT: his head really looks weird Zerox xD That could use some shrinking and shortening of the snout, also aren't the eyes a bit sideways in original? =3

 

[TheDivineBoss]

It looks like a bunch of crumbled gray paper balls glued together allong with two beady eyes.

2/5

 

[Ghost765]

ok time to get serious.
i lol'd at TDB's comment. tats pretty much what onix is.
anyways... is it just me or is there this tiny slit of open space in the first screenshot between the beak and his head?
his head looks awfully smooth to me...
and um...yah.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

The flat unshaded style on the custom texture. And the color looks more plastic metal rather than rock-esque (I could swear that Onix were more gray-brown in cartoons, and you could still see some details despite the plain colors).
I still think the model would do better with ingame textures. The golem rock tile would be a perfect choice imo, it keeps the cartoonish feeling but with more definition and details.

 

[Mr. Bob]

Bad points:

1. Massive poly count for a regular unit. Or a hero really.

2. Texture is very bad.

Good points:

1. It's a first.

Overall: 1/5 'Unacceptable' When I give this rating: I am sorry I had to give this rating, I mean no offense.

Bob's additional notes:

You seem to be learning a lot about modeling all the time. But, this model has some very bad traits that I must point out. The texture needs loads of work. And please, reduce the poly count. I cannot except this model. Therefore, it is Unacceptable, or 1/5.

 

[Misha]

Bad points:

1. Massive poly count for a regular unit. Or a hero really.

2. Texture is very bad.

Good points:

1. It's a first.

Overall: 1/5 'Unacceptable' When I give this rating: I am sorry I had to give this rating, I mean no offense.

Bob's additional notes:

You seem to be learning a lot about modeling all the time. But, this model has some very bad traits that I must point out. The texture needs loads of work. And please, reduce the poly count. I cannot except this model. Therefore, it is Unacceptable, or 1/5.

True, also in anims the body sometimes separates 8/ Also...... naga anims? well exept the head it looks good. 3.50/5 >8)

 

[Zerox]

True, also in anims the body sometimes separates 8/ Also...... naga anims? well exept the head it looks good. 3.50/5 >8)

Um the body doesn't separate when its animating. I've never seen it. I'm curious what you mean take a screenshot and show me.

And no its not Naga animations or any wc3 animations for that matter. ALL the animations were custom made by Lord_T.

 

[Misha]

Um the body doesn't separate when its animating. I've never seen it. I'm curious what you mean take a screenshot and show me.

And no its not Naga animations or any wc3 animations for that matter. ALL the animations were custom made by Lord_T.

it does separate around the first two geospheres on the ground, resizing one should fix that fine =3 Anims soo look like naga myrmidon anims xD (Grats to Lord_T for making such fine anims) just the head is messed up, quite. and so much pollies for head is not necesary =3

I'm debating if i could do some tweaks like on varsaigen's hive hammer....... but i kinda need a lot go get going xD Like we all xD

 

[somecrazyhobo]

ok honestly the texture sucks and the eyes/face is weird you should really change it other than that model and animations are good. 2/5

 

[Kuhneghetz]

If you want, I could help you give this model ingame textures (using the golem rock tile), and still let it have the cartoonish feeling, but with more details.

 

[Zerox]

If you want, I could help you give this model ingame textures (using the golem rock tile), and still let it have the cartoonish feeling, but with more details.

Here is Lorderan's Rock texture on him. Plus some adjustments. Is this better? If you think yours would look better still your welcome to do it DvO.

 

[Misha]

Here is Lorderan's Rock texture on him. Plus some adjustments. Is this better?

It would be better id the wrap takes a bit more of the whole image....... some details Lol. the head is still an overkill tho xD

~Misha~

 

[Kuhneghetz]

The wrap on the head needs to be fixed as it looks very stretchy.
Besides that, it's better now.



While you allowed me to do an edit, here's my attempt (with additional tweaks on the head model and on the uv wrap).

 

[KKRP]

Never thought I'd say this, but I like Zerox's better than DvO's. Now the world will end with that phrase...

 

[Zerox]

It looks nice. I guess you could just pastebin it to me and I'll update this.

Off-Topic: How did you do that attached image displayed in your message I have been wondering how to do that.

Edit: KKRP I think his Uv is better but I think the color fits better on mine.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I have to agree with KKRP that you gave it a better texture, so you should stick to that. But do fix the UV wrap I told you about, please.

 

[Devine]

Yea fix the wrap on that face.
the texture fits better.

 

[jarri]

its a fine model though i cant help but fell hes not long enough (and lol you still play with pokemon cards zerox? =P)

anyway +rep

 

[KKRP]

I have to agree with KKRP that you gave it a better texture, so you should stick to that. But do fix the UV wrap I told you about, please.

Something I thought DvO would never do, agree with me.

 

[Pyritie]

This texture

and this unwrap would be much better.

Also, perhaps you could make his eye black thingies a bit bigger? They're almost invisible ingame.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

... looks grey

 

[DarkePacific]

Its the eyes they don't look like onix's eyes

 

[Fasian_guy]

the eyes look wierded out

 

[Carnafex]

Great model, needs some on the face though. 3/5

 

[Lord_T]

DVO's Wrap on Zerox's selected texture = winrar.

 

[thevanquisher]

you should continue with the pokemon stuff because i think there should be more since there is barely any on hive. and pokemon is awesome it is not fail

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Serious.. The face makes me wanna cry out in merridment.

 

[Cham[p]ion]

Well pokemon is lame, but this model is not. Well done, awesome anims. =)

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

fix the face and it is gg

 

[RaijinSpark]

nice!!...

 

[Pyritie]

Fix this please.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I've sent my Onix fixes (2 versions actually, each with different textures) to Zerox. But she hasn't responded to my PM yet.

 

[Zerox]

There its finally updated sorry for the slow down.

 

[cHeRoL]

I don't like his mouth.