Night tavern

[BranaR]

Ordinary evening in a small town.

 

[Heinvers]

Welcome back BranaR^^
Nice snap. One thing tho, why is that pond so empty (WIP?) ?
Edit: I'm loving that sky, it has BranaR written all over it

 

[BranaR]

Thank you, Heinvers.
Yeah, work in progress. But i did not even think that pond looks empty.

 

[rcshaggy]

My maps don't look like that. :É
Good job on it though.

 

[Heinvers]

Seeing as it's a WIP here are my thoughts about it:
1. First nice composition.
2. Seeing as it's night you could darken the atmosphere a bit and add stronger light sources where you need them
3. The pond would need 2 or 3 lily pads (I'm obsessed about those, so you can ignore this) or some flower petals.
4. Somehow that canopy on your right bugs the background a bit imo.
5. You could make that unit take up a bit more attention seeing as this is a tavern.

 

[Strydhaizer]

The tree on the right and the trees in the middle are blocking the view , you might want to minimize them a bit. Also , you might want to change your style in making clouds , tried using uberclouds? It's more better bro

 

[sonofjay]

Also , you might want to change your style in making clouds , tried using uberclouds?

I actually like his style.

Looks great overall.

 

[Heinvers]

I actually like his style.

Looks great overall.

I thought I'm the only one that does.
Edit: Is that a raccoon on the lower right corner?

 

[Veritas 117]

I love the winding staircase up towards the lit up tower in the background. I don't know why, but that is the part that stood out the most to me. I really like the construction of the buildings and the details in the background with the arches.

I wish I had some constructive criticism, but I'm pretty impressed.

 

[lord_Turin]

as veritas im more drawn to the background, the composition of the tower is great, i want to see more of that!

the foreground seems to have some diffrences in scaling though, the person doesnt scale to the furniture or the door, and the lightning seems to be a bit off.

 

[fladdermasken]

Apart from the villager that lord_Turin pointed out, the scaling and layout design is really coherent and well done. The fog is also done a lot better than in some of your earlier captures.

The waterplane conflicts too much with the foreground though ― I think you need to go grayer.

 

[Gilles]

The waterplane conflicts too much with the foreground though ― I think you need to go grayer.

It matches the sky, and while that might not be uncommon irl, it doesn't look good imo.

Which is to say I agree with fladder.

 

[SA Dashie]

Awesome stuff.
Someday I would like to try out again this kind of quality terraining.