Hero Tavern

[Oziris]

This is my bigest projet of all(14hours)This is a Hero tavern wher all heros come to drink bear and eat food...First ther are statues of the legendery heros,then ther is a tavern but wher elfs come out side u can see illiden,i posted the wolf ^^,i made the roof.The best part is inside u see glasses and tables pianos u have the second floor stairs,books,dead wolfs,pigs, pictures of mighty heros(Paladin)cheese... ther has been some mistake with the pictures but u will see them:

 

[Oziris]

Here are some new pictures:

 

[FireMaster]

looks good, but you placed a head of a dead pig at the height of a chair

 

[Oziris]

I know it is cool(jocking)

 

[seruk]

Wow, okay. The outdoor stuff look slovenly, loads and loads of doodads not really fitting together along with pretty bad tiling (don't use rock as roads, when was the last time you saw rock do that?) creates something of a... sludge. Those trees don't go together at all, and it just looks like you dotted out whatever then covered it in whatever. Nothing makes any sense and look unnatural (realism is overrated, but this is too much I'm afraid) and thrown together.
Kudos for the indoor scene though, you succeded way more there. It actually looks nice. One thing tho: why is there a wagon and a mine cart inside? Can I also suggest some moodier lightning along with some shady looking characters hanging about?
The upper floor doesn't look as good as the bottom one though, get rid of the fish and the heads, they're just unnecessary.

Get some decent fog for the outdoors and tile it better. Get rid off all the gibberish and place doodads that makes some sense.
I reckon you're getting better Oziris, but you need to learn how to create athmosphere. Random doodad spamming is not the answer, you can create good looking stuff with just one doodad if you do it right.

Last thing: Is this for some kind of map or it it just terrain?

 

[Oziris]

Well the river with the rocks is what i saw in my frends hous and it looked good.The second floor l looks bad.I will put some heros and athmosphere in it.Well it can be a map i never tought about it...

 

[Gilles]

Seruk nailed it. The outdoors needs work. It doesn't blend all that well, and you have no fog set. The indoor is really good, one of my fav indoor scenes now!

+rep for the indoor.

 

[Oziris]

I am working on the outside.So i need to change the trees and somethings that dont fit and add a fog...

 

[Naze]

It is good (specialy for you, compared to your last terrains).

But here are some hints:

-Outside:

1) The trees variation is really bad. You could do it with more sence. I mean, the purple trees don't fix good with the green trees and the healthy green grass.
2) Some trees (the coniferous trees) must be bigger. They are too small,make them taller. I think their area is good, they must only be taller.
3)Wow, the little lake in fromt of the statues is really good! That was a really nice idea doing that! And the lily pads are very well-fixed. Congratulations!!!
4) The paths are full of enviormental doodads. remove some of the shrubs that "blocks" the paths.

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-Indoor:

1) Great indoor terrain!
2) The floor is not well fixed. there are some mistakes at their placing.
3) That fog you used is wierd. Try to find a better one
4) The collum you used isn't that good... Try to find another one that fix better with the terrain!
5) (again) Great indoor terrain!


I hope I helped

Remember: All these critcism was constructive.

Keep terraining! ;D

 

[Craka_J]

I spy many floating objects and fog inside a house. @_@

~Craka_J

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Looks nice!A bit ''dirty'' and fog isn't good.

 

[~Void~]

I love the one with the pond. Really good stuff.

 

[Craka_J]

I like your little stream.

~Craka_J

 

[Oziris]

Thx i dident posted becous i was on my holyday on Kopaonik.I will get buys!