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[hawk_767]

Hey. I'm posting this to say that if anyone posts a piece of writing, I'll be happy to review it for you. All you need to do is post the link to it here, or write the piece in this if you just want to write a piece for me to review. This is just practice in reviewing for me and it will be helpful for those of you who need it. I'll also put the reviews on my blog (refer to sig) so others can view the writing.

 

[terradont]

Crystalheart
The prologue to my book, Crystalheart. My first project that will hopefully turn out to be a full book, and my first attempt to write in english

 

[hawk_767]

all right I'll get to reviewing that when I get some time. probably soon. Thanks =)

 

[Ares_21]

https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f291/order-106174/

Please review when you get the chance and tell me what you think, its a shortish story I'm working on, not done yet having issues with the chapter I'm working on.

 

[TerraNexx]

Yea I write in English whole my life, but still not single story has come out yet...As soon as i make one, it will be yours to review!!

 

[hawk_767]

Ares, I'll review as soon as I can. I've been pretty busy lately. I'll print out your work and review soon dun worry =)

and hope to see some work Terra =D

 

[Volvox]

Since you like reviewing things, would you mind reading this? I could use someone's opinion... It's a start of my book titled 'Seven days of sorrow' for now, at least.

 

[Erkowich]

Since you like reviewing things, would you mind reading this? I could use someone's opinion... It's a start of my book titled 'Seven days of sorrow' for now, at least.

put the text in a better file, like open office. It's totaly free and you can make windows office files in that program so every1 can open them.

 

[Volvox]

Eeeeeek open office! But come on, even a calculator can open txt files.

 

[Erkowich]

Eeeeeek open office! But come on, even a calculator can open txt files.

just that it's really hard to read it xD, the text is like everywhere

 

[hawk_767]

lol this files better that way I can open it in open office myself. better that getting a Microsoft Word doc since I don't have word any more.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Euuh, seriously i don't really that much of a STORY in book format or anything but i do have a story. You also review story concepts etc? If you do, you might wanna take a look at mine and click on the link in my signature. If not...... ok

 

[hawk_767]

Ok Volvox I've got your review. I have stuff on there corrected but you won't see it without reading every word over and comparing yours and mine unless you download open office. I changed colors of mistakes but on Text document it doesn't show up correctly with the color.

I included a text file but i cant upload an open doc file so I saved it as a Microsoft Word doc. Not sure how it will look in the format since some things may have changed.

 

[Volvox]

Thanks for the review, grammar mistakes i would have easily dealt with on my other computer, using word's spell checker but you really helped with the tenses. It's been a while since i last had to use so many in one place so i got sloppy. I am glad you liked the story and i've already read through your writing tips ^^