N-Man - Superstar

[Megafyr]

Hi there! As you probably know, I am into rap, and I made this track today! Thoughts, feedback, likes? I am trying to improve both lyrically and beatwise. Thanks in advance!

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[xxdingo93xx]

Nice, the beat is awesome. Meeh, it's just me, but I'd like it more if it was a little bit faster.

 

[Jaret]

I would loved to hear it. Well, meh, can't wait to hear the newer one ^^

 

[Zombie]

Make one about the V-man.

 

[Devine]

Awesome sound :3

 

[Megafyr]

Here's the newer version Got more songs coming and a mixtape dropping soon

 

[Devine]

Here's the newer version Got more songs coming and a mixtape dropping soon

Dude. You should fill it some more. There are some gaps that sound like shit. just add some yada yada between "I'm a superstar" and "and I don't know who you are"

 

[redscores]

Sounds really good man. I am more of a metal and rock fan, but it sounds cool, and just a advice: your lyrics should be deeper, you know, like prinz pi's rap for example: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dvPq8wmYzMc

It is german, but the text has a message, which is intelligent and deep, thats the ultimate challenge for a rapper .

 

[Zombie]

I'm totally not into the genre, but it didn't sound bad. The choir part and the intro could use some pimping, but the rest was alright.