Rhymes, and what not?

[Jaret]

Hello out there, world. I wrote a song about THW in 20 minutes, was bored to hell. I wanted to show it to you. And, feel free to post your own lyrics out here. I don't know why there isn't a thread about own songs here on THW, but now there is. Here's my song:

The best site on the web

The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?
The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?

Loved by all right now, but need more rep,
Gonna start a new business, step by step,
Doing today a school work named after a Prep,
It’s a real cool project, IT’s called a site rap,
When surfing through the net, nowhere to find,
A site like the Hive, IT’s one of a kind,
Who saiz it sucks he must be fucking blind,
Hive workshop is the best site known to mankind,
Even in google nothing can be done, really sad,
I’m searching for a site that’s alike, am I fucking mad?
All I wanna see is another banner called an ad,
I can’t believe that a facebook profile is all that I had,
In the real life I’m just a normal guy,
Believed some sites are good, and all other die,
Now I’m Jaret, and registered to the fucking sky,
To the Hive I said hello, to facebook I said goodbye,

The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?
The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?

When I try to hide that I am a little nervous,
I go to my friends at THW and say “hy Fellas”,
Maybe I need some intense medical service,
OR maybe I’m just fucking jealous,
When thinking of Ralle I think of Bill Gates,
Thinking of America and some minor states,
Love the fact that in hive are no hates,
Everyone is good, and everyone relates,
When reading a thread I see “rate”,
I don’t like something, I say I don’t wanna hate,
I don’t comment, don’t spam as you all can state,
If I love something, for comments there’s no wait,
Rating everything five, All of them I really mean,
To some I say “This is the best model I’ve ever seen!”,
And I don’t lie, from low quality to the big scene,
I’m a cool dude and I’m just 14.

The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?
The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?

No one can top The hive, and no one ever will,
No one can be like Ralle, no one has that kind of skill,
No one can be cool as him when he’s like “jus’ Chill”,
Those are the rules, do you understand this drill?,
Hope to get rep for God’s sake, Not be an under-liner,
Wanna be just like him a website designer,
Don’t wanna be just a simple minor,
I would hate it when its’ like “hey kleiner!”
I would go insane, and never come back to be a dude,
Go nuts on everyone, and be ridiculously rude,
Now who wants some, let me turn you into fish food,
Then comes the ban, and I’m like “Fuck, I’m screwed”,
But I’m a good guy, And spent to help the whole night,
Never back down from a challenge for the good fight,
In my world I like it to be not rude, but alright,
I will be one day the Hive workshop’s shining knight,

The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?
The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
What’s the best site on the internet there is?

And, BTW, I used this beat as the beat of this rap. The lyrics may suck ass, but that is only because I wrote them in 20 minutes.

PLEASE, write some of your own stuff and send it here. I would like to see the other Side of The Hive members, not the modelers, not the skinners, not the artists in drawing (I'm one too.) but the poets.

Here are the rules:
1.Must be a song you made.
2.If you write 2 songs, don't post them in the same post. Post them one after another to avoid confusion.
3.They should have the formula that I use. It's simple:

[CENTER][HIDDEN="Name of the song here"]the content of song here[/HIDDEN][/CENTER]
[URL="www.youtube.com"]URL of the melody here (dont have to include this if you didnt use some melody)[/URL] Description here.

4.That's it

 

[Megafyr]

Lol sweet! Record that shit and ima DL it fosho! Okay, here's a quick verse, my artist name is N-Man, and I am terrain forum rep, just so you know.

If you an artist hit up the terrain forum
Be amazed by daze you get from watch a stone golum
quick on dissin but the rep we all rollin
bigger than an armored tanks troop patrolin
Shoot pictures at ya like it was a chopper
screens so sick, bitch go see your doctor
and he can't heal ya so you gonna get fucked up
bitches going ham cuz the art really shock rocks

LOL ^^

 

[chilla_killa]

Lulz, nice song ^^

 

[Jaret]

Lol sweet! Record that shit and ima DL it fosho! Okay, here's a quick verse, my artist name is N-Man, and I am terrain forum rep, just so you know.

If you an artist hit up the terrain forum
Be amazed by daze you get from watch a stone golum
quick on dissin but the rep we all rollin
bigger than an armored tanks troop patrolin
Shoot pictures at ya like it was a chopper
screens so sick, bitch go see your doctor
and he can't heal ya so you gonna get fucked up
bitches going ham cuz the art really shock rocks

LOL ^^

Wow, Crazy rhymes, Megafyr. Yea, you sure won the terraining contest. Well, we should make some rap group called THW
Come on people, we need more songs, they don't have to be rap, they can be Pop, Rock and so on. Please send more rhymes, and like that.

P.S. I'll be like every week updating the first post, so it reappears in the off-topic forum.
P.P.S. My artist names are A-truth / MC-Amcou (Read this like emcee am so) / Ganondorf
P.P.P.S. you can fast come to this page by clicking the link in my signature. Thanks for feedback and so on. You guys ROCK!

 

[xxdingo93xx]

Wermm.. if I could rap or if I even could write songs I'd post somethin here buuut ... I'm only into dancing, not into rapping by myself.

 

[Jaret]

Wermm.. if I could rap or if I even could write songs I'd post somethin here buuut ... I'm only into dancing, not into rapping by myself.

Are you a break-dancer? If you are, could you sent me some clips of you dancing break-dance and so I could make a Music video with you dancing and me singing???

P.S. If you can write a song, just write it down here... You don't have rules like It must be rap, it can be rock, or pop, or wtf. i know.

 

[Miss_Foxy]

You've really come up with a great song for The Hive Workshop, who knows, we could use it as background music...

 

[Jaret]

You've really come up with a great song for The Hive Workshop, who knows, we could use it as background music...

Hmm, That wouldn't be a bad Idea, but... some people Don't "like" rap... We should make more songs and lyrics. Some for Rock, some for Pop... And so on
You're like an Idea machine really. I would give you rep right now if i could

Oh, and to tell y'a all right now what I'm into...
This song is just so plain AWESOME!
If I had the nerve I would include this song in some map I made. It's just so... EPIC! I mean... EPIC! The Vitamin String Quartet RULES!

 

[xxdingo93xx]

Are you a break-dancer? If you are, could you sent me some clips of you dancing break-dance and so I could make a Music video with you dancing and me singing???

P.S. If you can write a song, just write it down here... You don't have rules like It must be rap, it can be rock, or pop, or wtf. i know.

Yep, I'm a b-boy too ... however, I just started it in january and I am really not good at it yet. General hip hop dance is more my specialty ... like a lot of hip hop based styles mixed together.
Werm, I have no videos of me dancing ALONE. I'm in a crew with 12 other guys ...
oh and no, I'm not into singing in general, may it be rock, rap, etc.

 

[Jaret]

Yep, I'm a b-boy too ... however, I just started it in january and I am really not good at it yet. General hip hop dance is more my specialty ... like a lot of hip hop based styles mixed together.
Werm, I have no videos of me dancing ALONE. I'm in a crew with 12 other guys ...
oh and no, I'm not into singing in general, may it be rock, rap, etc.

Hmm... well, I didn't mean you alone I meant you and your "CLAPPA". I'm something like a breaker now, just started yesterday, and learned the simple six-step

 

[xxdingo93xx]

Hmm... well, I didn't mean you alone I meant you and your "CLAPPA". I'm something like a breaker now, just started yesterday, and learned the simple six-step

Hmmz, well here is a vid:

That's our choreography for 2009, we already have another one for 2010 (which just finished last week). on 27th june we'll have a tournament again ...

Edit: I'm that guy in orange

 

[Jaret]

Hmmz, well here is a vid:

That's our choreography for 2009, we already have another one for 2010 (which just finished last week). on 27th june we'll have a tournament again ...

Edit: I'm that guy in orange

Cool dance moves, not too complex or professional, but still cool. I suppose you're still learning the big tricks like the one hand-handstands, the grapples and the freezes. Still trying to do one hand-handstand (Got strong arms) but still... no success

 

[xxdingo93xx]

Cool dance moves, not too complex or professional, but still cool. I suppose you're still learning the big tricks like the one hand-handstands, the grapples and the freezes. Still trying to do one hand-handstand (Got strong arms) but still... no success

one-hand-handstand is easy
well, the freeze's are kinda hard. I can do the simple ones, but well, I am still kinda noobish.
(I think this goes too off-topic ... but who cares .. >.<)

 

[Jaret]

one-hand-handstand is easy
well, the freeze's are kinda hard. I can do the simple ones, but well, I am still kinda noobish.
(I think this goes too off-topic ... but who cares .. >.<)

Alright, let's get back on-topic on this off-topic thread.
Send some Songs down below. In the first thread you have the formula how to submit your song.

 

[Jaret]

Unnamed

That rhythm in your eyes,
That holds the love that never dies,
I see you and I know that I’m alive,
You’re the conqueror of my heart’s hive,
When a new day has come to dawn,
I remember that you are still gone,
You’re far away but still very close,
I’d only love to give you another red rose.

All the love turned into hate,
Let me tell you this straight,
You’re more beautiful than the sky,
For you I would die…

It’s no good, no good

Cause I know how you are,
And how you think of me,
I don’t wanna be friends,
I want a family,
I may not be so rich,
I may not have a band.
I wanna be with you, with you,
‘till the very end.

Just like it was all before,
Like the day I saw you in the store,
Was it really so hard to ask?
I ask myself was that an easy task,
From time to time love comes back with peace,
From second to second dies one piece,
If our love’s illegal I say “F*** off Law”,
Even till this day your face I draw…

All the love turned into hate,
Let me tell you this straight,
You’re more beautiful than the sky,
For you I would die…

It’s no good, no good

Cause I know how you are,
And how you think of me,
I don’t wanna be friends,
I want a family,
I may not be so rich,
I may not have a band.
I wanna be with you, with you,
‘till the very end.

It had to happen,
No good to die,
I can’t believe it was just all a lie,
And now It happens again,
And now I don’t pretend,
I will love you in the end…

It has to happen!

Cause I know how you are,
And how you think of me,
I don’t wanna be friends,
I want a family,
I may not be so rich,
I may not have a band.
I wanna be with you, with you,
‘till the very end.
I wanna be with you, with you,
‘till the very end.

I used the Vitamin string quartet cover to Simple design by Breaking Benjamin. Well, the refrain of this song is a little old. I wrote it like 3 or 4 months ago. If you are a little confused how to sing this, here's a tip: You sing when you hear the violin (The violin is meant to replace the voice).

 

[Arisato]

wow nice songs!

 

[Jaret]

wow nice songs!

Thanks. So guys... I see only Megafyr sent some lyrics... please, send some lyrics to this thread. It is meant to show to THW that there are song writers among the artists.

 

[ACdestinydream]

The one i like

The one i like
Isn't the girl i fight
Neither its the toy with fur
Although they make me curl

The one i like
Isn't the god in church
And not the bag i like
Definitely not leaving you in lurch

Oh try to understand me
Because i will bring you out
Give you gifts
And not make you shout

Oh trying to understand you
Is like finding you in a crowded place
With no knowledge of you
And walking in your pace

The one i like
Is the one who cries
When im feeling sad
And when my best friend isn't by my side

Oh tell me
Why are you leaving
Why do you want to leave me behind
And all those best friends you are having

Because the truth
Is about you
Because the one i like
Is you

this is like a crude version of a *ahem* i have sent to a girl who is leaving for USA to migrate. i forgot some of it and some of it have my feelings in it. thats like 1 month ago.

 

[Jaret]

Cool song, just this part is a little weird:
"Neither its the toy with fur
Although they make me curl"

I like this part the most:
"Oh trying to understand you
Is like finding you in a crowded place
With no knowledge of you
And walking in your pace"

Well, pretty good song, I would like to hear the rhythm and melody of it.

 

[ACdestinydream]

sorry. i forgot part of the love letter/goodbye letter and it was the first part. i remembered something about teddy bears so i wrote it down =D

rhythm and melody hmmm.... i dont have a link to that song. i dont even remember the title of that song =/

and the last 3 paragraphs were my fav too cos i cried while i wrote that... it have the deepest impact on me (for now) and they were my true feelings. i regretted not telling her sooner. lmao. biggest mistake of my life.

 

[Jaret]

sorry. i forgot part of the love letter/goodbye letter and it was the first part. i remembered something about teddy bears so i wrote it down =D

rhythm and melody hmmm.... i dont have a link to that song. i dont even remember the title of that song =/

and the last 3 paragraphs were my fav too cos i cried while i wrote that... it have the deepest impact on me (for now) and they were my true feelings. i regretted not telling her sooner. lmao. biggest mistake of my life.

Well, everybody makes mistakes... Maybe you got her phone-number and... well... I dunno, somehow you can catch up with her. Chat, or WTF I know... You see the song I wrote down named "Unnamed"?
The refrain goes like this:

Cause I know how you are,
And how you think of me,
I don’t wanna be friends,
I want a family,
I may not be so rich,
I may not have a band.
I wanna be with you, with you,
‘till the very end.

It's too about love to a female. This one got a boyfriend the next day I got written the song down, I wanted to give it to her... But, well... That happens, Right? The strangest thing is that I wasn't upset nor something else when I wrote this... Wait, this is not the song about her... gonna change the description, this is a random song written. Hmm...

And, btw...
Could you, at the beginning of the song (Before hidden tag) write down:(

)

and add this to the end of the song: ([(/)center]), and just remove the ()-s. so that they appear to be on the center of the screen, which makes it stand out for some reason more. thanks.

 

[ACdestinydream]

what makes you so sure she wont get a boyfriend in USA? note that shes migrating there, meaning she might never come back.

sry bout center, i forgot =D
oh and i added the center right before you edited your message teaching me how to =D


and let me think of a new song and a song with beats for it =D

no man's land

My heart is a gem that could never ever be destroyed
No girl can enter it without my permit
Now i'm gona suffer alone because there's no one to talk to
Hate it when i sit alone
When i think of how i sleep without anyone beside me

You can hear my cries

When you really care

I will eat alone
With no one beside me
To numb my heart
Numb my heart

I will walk alone
On valentine's day
To stop my cries
Stop my cries

thats all i can think of.

song that the beat i used

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A63VwWz1ij0

 

[Jaret]

what makes you so sure she wont get a boyfriend in USA? note that shes migrating there, meaning she might never come back.

sry bout center, i forgot =D
oh and i added the center right before you edited your message teaching me how to =D


and let me think of a new song and a song with beats for it =D

no man's land

My heart is a gem that could never ever be destroyed
No girl can enter it without my permit
Now i'm gona suffer alone because there's no one to talk to
Hate it when i sit alone
When i think of how i sleep without anyone beside me

You can hear my cries

When you really care

I will eat alone
With no one beside me
To numb my heart
Numb my heart

I will walk alone
On valentine's day
To stop my cries
Stop my cries

thats all i can think of.

song that the beat i used

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A63VwWz1ij0

Never give up! Something might and will happen if you really want it to happen

 

[ACdestinydream]

thats just a song that i randomly created =D

 

[Jaret]

thats just a song that i randomly created =D

I meant about the girl

 

[ACdestinydream]

=D wiah me good luck!