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Discussion in 'Off-Topic' started by Jaret, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. Jaret

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    Hello out there, world. I wrote a song about THW in 20 minutes, was bored to hell. I wanted to show it to you. And, feel free to post your own lyrics out here. I don't know why there isn't a thread about own songs here on THW, but now there is. Here's my song:

    The best site on the web
    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?
    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?

    Loved by all right now, but need more rep,
    Gonna start a new business, step by step,
    Doing today a school work named after a Prep,
    It’s a real cool project, IT’s called a site rap,
    When surfing through the net, nowhere to find,
    A site like the Hive, IT’s one of a kind,
    Who saiz it sucks he must be fucking blind,
    Hive workshop is the best site known to mankind,
    Even in google nothing can be done, really sad,
    I’m searching for a site that’s alike, am I fucking mad?
    All I wanna see is another banner called an ad,
    I can’t believe that a facebook profile is all that I had,
    In the real life I’m just a normal guy,
    Believed some sites are good, and all other die,
    Now I’m Jaret, and registered to the fucking sky,
    To the Hive I said hello, to facebook I said goodbye,

    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?
    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?

    When I try to hide that I am a little nervous,
    I go to my friends at THW and say “hy Fellas”,
    Maybe I need some intense medical service,
    OR maybe I’m just fucking jealous,
    When thinking of Ralle I think of Bill Gates,
    Thinking of America and some minor states,
    Love the fact that in hive are no hates,
    Everyone is good, and everyone relates,
    When reading a thread I see “rate”,
    I don’t like something, I say I don’t wanna hate,
    I don’t comment, don’t spam as you all can state,
    If I love something, for comments there’s no wait,
    Rating everything five, All of them I really mean,
    To some I say “This is the best model I’ve ever seen!”,
    And I don’t lie, from low quality to the big scene,
    I’m a cool dude and I’m just 14.

    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?
    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?

    No one can top The hive, and no one ever will,
    No one can be like Ralle, no one has that kind of skill,
    No one can be cool as him when he’s like “jus’ Chill”,
    Those are the rules, do you understand this drill?,
    Hope to get rep for God’s sake, Not be an under-liner,
    Wanna be just like him a website designer,
    Don’t wanna be just a simple minor,
    I would hate it when its’ like “hey kleiner!”
    I would go insane, and never come back to be a dude,
    Go nuts on everyone, and be ridiculously rude,
    Now who wants some, let me turn you into fish food,
    Then comes the ban, and I’m like “Fuck, I’m screwed”,
    But I’m a good guy, And spent to help the whole night,
    Never back down from a challenge for the good fight,
    In my world I like it to be not rude, but alright,
    I will be one day the Hive workshop’s shining knight,

    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?
    The best site on the planet is Hive workshop,
    Singing about it right now in nice flowing hip hop,
    Let’s start a new gigantic underrated quiz,
    What’s the best site on the internet there is?

    And, BTW, I used this beat as the beat of this rap. The lyrics may suck ass, but that is only because I wrote them in 20 minutes.

    PLEASE, write some of your own stuff and send it here. I would like to see the other Side of The Hive members, not the modelers, not the skinners, not the artists in drawing (I'm one too.) but the poets.

    Here are the rules:
    1.Must be a song you made.
    2.If you write 2 songs, don't post them in the same post. Post them one after another to avoid confusion.
    3.They should have the formula that I use. It's simple:
    PHP:
    [CENTER][HIDDEN="Name of the song here"]the content of song here[/HIDDEN][/CENTER]
    [URL="www.youtube.com"]URL of the melody here (dont have to include this if you didnt use some melody)[/URL] Description here.
    4.That's it :D
     
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  2. Megafyr

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    Lol sweet! Record that shit and ima DL it fosho! Okay, here's a quick verse, my artist name is N-Man, and I am terrain forum rep, just so you know.

    If you an artist hit up the terrain forum
    Be amazed by daze you get from watch a stone golum
    quick on dissin but the rep we all rollin
    bigger than an armored tanks troop patrolin
    Shoot pictures at ya like it was a chopper
    screens so sick, bitch go see your doctor
    and he can't heal ya so you gonna get fucked up
    bitches going ham cuz the art really shock rocks

    LOL ^^
     
  3. chilla_killa

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    Lulz, nice song ^^
     
  4. Jaret

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    Wow, Crazy rhymes, Megafyr. Yea, you sure won the terraining contest. Well, we should make some rap group called THW :D
    Come on people, we need more songs, they don't have to be rap, they can be Pop, Rock and so on. Please send more rhymes, and like that.

    P.S. I'll be like every week updating the first post, so it reappears in the off-topic forum.
    P.P.S. My artist names are A-truth / MC-Amcou (Read this like emcee am so) / Ganondorf :D
    P.P.P.S. you can fast come to this page by clicking the link in my signature. Thanks for feedback and so on. You guys ROCK! :D
     
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  5. xxdingo93xx

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    Wermm.. if I could rap or if I even could write songs I'd post somethin here buuut ... I'm only into dancing, not into rapping by myself. o_O
     
  6. Jaret

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    Are you a break-dancer? If you are, could you sent me some clips of you dancing break-dance and so I could make a Music video with you dancing and me singing???

    P.S. If you can write a song, just write it down here... You don't have rules like It must be rap, it can be rock, or pop, or wtf. i know.
     
  7. Miss_Foxy

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    You've really come up with a great song for The Hive Workshop, who knows, we could use it as background music...
     
  8. Jaret

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    Hmm, That wouldn't be a bad Idea, but... some people Don't "like" rap... We should make more songs and lyrics. Some for Rock, some for Pop... And so on :D
    You're like an Idea machine really. I would give you rep right now if i could :p

    Oh, and to tell y'a all right now what I'm into...
    This song is just so plain AWESOME!
    If I had the nerve I would include this song in some map I made. It's just so... EPIC! I mean... EPIC! The Vitamin String Quartet RULES!
     
  9. xxdingo93xx

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    Yep, I'm a b-boy too ... however, I just started it in january and I am really not good at it yet. General hip hop dance is more my specialty ... like a lot of hip hop based styles mixed together.
    Werm, I have no videos of me dancing ALONE. I'm in a crew with 12 other guys ...
    oh and no, I'm not into singing in general, may it be rock, rap, etc. ;)
     
  10. Jaret

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    Hmm... well, I didn't mean you alone :D I meant you and your "CLAPPA". I'm something like a breaker now, just started yesterday, and learned the simple six-step :D
     
  11. xxdingo93xx

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    Hmmz, well here is a vid:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4QsJLCGr7s
    That's our choreography for 2009, we already have another one for 2010 (which just finished last week). on 27th june we'll have a tournament again ...

    Edit: I'm that guy in orange
     
  12. Jaret

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    Cool dance moves, not too complex or professional, but still cool. I suppose you're still learning the big tricks like the one hand-handstands, the grapples and the freezes. Still trying to do one hand-handstand (Got strong arms) but still... no success :(
     
  13. xxdingo93xx

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    one-hand-handstand is easy :D
    well, the freeze's are kinda hard. I can do the simple ones, but well, I am still kinda noobish.
    (I think this goes too off-topic ... but who cares .. >.<)
     
  14. Jaret

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    Alright, let's get back on-topic on this off-topic thread.
    Send some Songs down below. In the first thread you have the formula how to submit your song.
     
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    Unnamed
    That rhythm in your eyes,
    That holds the love that never dies,
    I see you and I know that I’m alive,
    You’re the conqueror of my heart’s hive,
    When a new day has come to dawn,
    I remember that you are still gone,
    You’re far away but still very close,
    I’d only love to give you another red rose.

    All the love turned into hate,
    Let me tell you this straight,
    You’re more beautiful than the sky,
    For you I would die…

    It’s no good, no good

    Cause I know how you are,
    And how you think of me,
    I don’t wanna be friends,
    I want a family,
    I may not be so rich,
    I may not have a band.
    I wanna be with you, with you,
    ‘till the very end.

    Just like it was all before,
    Like the day I saw you in the store,
    Was it really so hard to ask?
    I ask myself was that an easy task,
    From time to time love comes back with peace,
    From second to second dies one piece,
    If our love’s illegal I say “F*** off Law”,
    Even till this day your face I draw…

    All the love turned into hate,
    Let me tell you this straight,
    You’re more beautiful than the sky,
    For you I would die…

    It’s no good, no good

    Cause I know how you are,
    And how you think of me,
    I don’t wanna be friends,
    I want a family,
    I may not be so rich,
    I may not have a band.
    I wanna be with you, with you,
    ‘till the very end.

    It had to happen,
    No good to die,
    I can’t believe it was just all a lie,
    And now It happens again,
    And now I don’t pretend,
    I will love you in the end…

    It has to happen!

    Cause I know how you are,
    And how you think of me,
    I don’t wanna be friends,
    I want a family,
    I may not be so rich,
    I may not have a band.
    I wanna be with you, with you,
    ‘till the very end.
    I wanna be with you, with you,
    ‘till the very end.

    I used the Vitamin string quartet cover to Simple design by Breaking Benjamin. Well, the refrain of this song is a little old. I wrote it like 3 or 4 months ago. If you are a little confused how to sing this, here's a tip: You sing when you hear the violin (The violin is meant to replace the voice).
     
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  16. Arisato

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    wow nice songs!
     
  17. Jaret

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    Thanks. So guys... I see only Megafyr sent some lyrics... please, send some lyrics to this thread. It is meant to show to THW that there are song writers among the artists.
     
  18. ACdestinydream

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    The one i like


    The one i like
    Isn't the girl i fight
    Neither its the toy with fur
    Although they make me curl

    The one i like
    Isn't the god in church
    And not the bag i like
    Definitely not leaving you in lurch

    Oh try to understand me
    Because i will bring you out
    Give you gifts
    And not make you shout

    Oh trying to understand you
    Is like finding you in a crowded place
    With no knowledge of you
    And walking in your pace

    The one i like
    Is the one who cries
    When im feeling sad
    And when my best friend isn't by my side

    Oh tell me
    Why are you leaving
    Why do you want to leave me behind
    And all those best friends you are having

    Because the truth
    Is about you
    Because the one i like
    Is you

    this is like a crude version of a *ahem* i have sent to a girl who is leaving for USA to migrate. i forgot some of it and some of it have my feelings in it. thats like 1 month ago.
     
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  19. Jaret

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    Cool song, just this part is a little weird:
    "Neither its the toy with fur
    Although they make me curl"

    I like this part the most:
    "Oh trying to understand you
    Is like finding you in a crowded place
    With no knowledge of you
    And walking in your pace"

    Well, pretty good song, I would like to hear the rhythm and melody of it.
     
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    sorry. i forgot part of the love letter/goodbye letter and it was the first part. i remembered something about teddy bears so i wrote it down =D

    rhythm and melody hmmm.... i dont have a link to that song. i dont even remember the title of that song =/

    and the last 3 paragraphs were my fav too cos i cried while i wrote that... it have the deepest impact on me (for now) and they were my true feelings. i regretted not telling her sooner. lmao. biggest mistake of my life.