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My weird dream(kinda romantic)

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Dream

My dream had just came to a start..really no beginning...



Jeremy and Sam are just friends, as for me I wasnt really going towards

anything except some pizza with Joseph. In the mean time Emilee and Zack

have been going out ,that was the group. Now heres the story. Me and

everyone else were going to a trailer park as we were talking about some
cranky oldy guy who used to live in a house were we were exploring...

So there was a little cave and we decided to go through it...we found bones

we thought it was plastic..which it was. "Just some Halloween decorations"

explained Emily. So we thought, okay whatever lets go. So we got out and

our parents told us they would bring us to an Hockey game if we were good

and she would bring all your friends. I took up the phone and had dialed

there numbers... "Joseph..call Emilee and Sam, oh and Jermey we have a

mission..". A couple days later We had all gotton to go into an Hockey

game... Our parents left so we could enjoy ourselves. The hockey rink was

not inside it was an outside Hockey rink and below a hill... Nbody was on a

hill but I supposed we could watch for free. As we got ontop of the

mountian Jermey said he would just stay up ontop of the mountian... We said

okay and of course Joseph had to bring some pizza.. For some reason this

man gave us tickets to be able to sit on the Hockey rink sidelines, we did.

Zack and Emilee sat on one side as Sam, Joseph and I sat on another

side...Joseph sat down the warming pizza... I looked over at Zack and

Emilee ..they were hugging.. aww. Anyways after the hockey game someone had

a knife and had hit the ice with it.. so after the hockey players got off

and Sam, Joseph and I we seen Zack ad Emilee still were hugging and

watching... I had yelled at them and they wouldnt get up... I ran across

the breaking ice and had swung them off the Fast cracking Ice. As I took my

breath the people were gone. The game was over. I suggested it was a guy

that gave us the tickets to sit on the ice.. We started up the snowy

mountain and we realized people there and started clapping after I walked

up into the circle...I stopped ..everyone was in the circle...Joseph Jermey

Sam Zack and Emilee and I. Sam looked into to Jermey's eyes and had seen

him. They had hugged... They had loved eachother in the end.. Everyone had

started cheering. It was a grand sight. As I was leading the path with

Joseph with his Pizza right next to me..I had gotten stabbed from the

crowd...I had gotten stabbed in the stomach. The world went blurry and my

vision went into black and white. I fell back on to the snow. The pain

crippled me and the man was gone.. my sight was gone. Everything was black.

I knew my friends had loved eachother and would take care of eachother. I

knew I had lived a life worth the while...


Signed:
Pandawarrior 11 yr old boy



Comment: I had woken up and just had to tell this story it was so amazing.
I hope you all loved it.
 
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aww...

well atleast we all know you have a heart panda! it was a little hard to follow at points(it was a dream so okay) and i believe a got the jist of it.
lol bye the way you're a good writer,the way you worded some things is why i actualy read it. good job.
 
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I have just one simple question. What the hell were you even saying? I mean, even I, 3 years ago, at 11, could type out paragraphs after paragraphs of english that was superior to yours.

In case you don't understand, it means that I can't understand what you're typing.
 
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