I actually find it quite charming! But work on the crack in the wall, and find a more fitting model instead of the fire elementals on the Old Gods side. This has a certain air of simple symbolism that i love, but you could add more counteracting details, such as standards on the left side, and crystal something or a nothers' on the left. And really just mix it up a bit, and you could even work with some lighting techniques of counteracting glow doodads and lights. One of my more demanding problems is the use of the the blizzard tiles, that are around the wonderful chessboard. They seem undecorated and out of place somehow. Anyways very nice, and i hope to see more of this sort of thing from you!