My Orc City (come and take a look)

[Lonely Wolf.]

Here's a few picture of a Orc city i'm gonna use in a campain!
And it would be nice if you could post a comment!

 

[imported_Blademaster]

Looks very good

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

Thx!

I think i'm gonna copy this over to a bigger map. And make it something like the Orc bonus campaign!

 

[imported_Bort]

very very very nice
looks wonderful
mind if i copy the idea with the barrel/wall?

bort

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

i don't mind at all!

 

[DarkShadow]

I like the buildings itself and the idea with the barrel-wall, but the ground between the buildings lacks detail (add some doodads, whatever, I hope you see what I mean). Use noise to deform the ground and use smooth to make it look more natural. I think the area outside the city wasn't necessary atm, thats why you didn't place anything there, right?

 

[Metabee]

Maybe if you added a sky plz, and do with the terrain as Dark Shadow Said, and if i was an Orc warlord/Mayor of this city, then i wouldn't probably put Orc warlocks, more like catapults or grunts, and you could make the cliffs more chaotic, since it's natural, and if it wasn't(like as if it was Dugged) then i dont think they could make it so smooth, and it needs more variety in buildings.

The barrels, and the idea is good in itself.

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

yes i know that the roads are badly detailed. And i will add a sky. I youst forgot about it


I'll start working on it now

 

[bleh]

yo wolf... long time no post, hehe...

anyway, you wanted my input so here goes.

imho, the area looks a little plain without variations of building type/shape and ground height, but thats not a bad thing, its just all the same. A few more buildings of a different type/shape would fix that with some height variations on the ground.
Also, even though it looks great so far, it seems you have packed all the buildings a bit too tightly together and, like said by metabee and others, the ground lacks decoration...
A few well placed trees and other barrens style doodads can be helpful.
You may not have reached this part yet, but towns also have people in them

looks great so far, i hope i didnt offend you with any of my critisism... and i hope i helped you

 

[RaZoR]

use more than 2 tiles for the streets, add doodads and use the noise tool(like darkshadow already said). except of that it looks nice

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

here's more pic's from the city


I hope this one is much bether!

 

[shadows_call]

you're good at this. Terraining has never exactly been a specialty of mine.

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

Thank you shadows_call. When i 1st opened WE, i started maknig a Helm's Deep terrain, then placed a few units. And THEN! I started the map and...THEY DIDN't ATTACK :shock:

Well....This is 2 years ago. I know how to make maps now

 

[Modeler]

Looks cool

It looks cool but be consistant with the barrels, like blocade the entrence with them a bit and maby have a trigger that causes barrels to fall over by a clumsy grunt or somin. (just some ideas)

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

i won't do do anything with triggers on this one. Maybe i'll copy it over to a diferent map and use it in a campaign!

 

[Modeler]

aww

Aww a grunt knocking over a barrel would be funny (specialy if it landed on someones head such as the commander)
Anyway city looks cool gj.

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

thx! c",)

 

[Dreka]

One thing that struct me as out-of-place was the Lordaeron Gate. :\

And I'll emphasize (yet another guy I know) the need for several different tiles for a "natural" road. Even dry Village Fall grass would not be out of place here.

 

[Nogusta]

Aren't there a lot of custom orcish buildings and stuff you can get down at the gaiascape forums?

 

[Lonely Wolf.]

I have no idea. Becouse i have never been at the gaiaforum

 

[sokem]

Ahm Man, it's to beautiful. I'm going to create a movie is it ok if I use the barrel wall? it's a great idea.