My First Terrain - Mushroom Planet

[money-meow]

Here it is.. Hopefully you like it

 

[DungeonM]

It could use alot of work. Its kind of plain generic terrain. Lacks an atmosphere and is mostly overhead shots. You can see the edge of the terrain in one shot. Lastly your terrain lacks a focus, all of your screenshots just sort of display some random area full of random terrain. If this is meant to be playable that might be desirable but cinematicaly it dosen't look good.

 

[money-meow]

Yeah I should probably take some shots looking upward and stuff. It could be used for either one. I will try to add more atmosphere on my next terrain. I will probably start on my next terrain as soon as I can.

 

[PsYcHo.CrAzY.]

Very good terrain meow, I can tell u put a lot of work, but just as Dun said, it does need a bit more atmosphere

Also, nice texture variation, but there are some parts where it is a bit too drastic.

 

[money-meow]

thank you for the comment PSycho

 

[Gilles]

Not bad. Some good tile variation. I've seen better mushroom planets though. One I remember had giant mushrooms with I thought was cool.

I agree with DungeonM. It seems a bit random. Looks like it could be playable, but I'm guessing it isn't.

 

[money-meow]

Okay, I will do better the next time!

 

[Craka_J]

Good tilevariation, but the placement of your doodads look random and cluttered. The terrain looks very busy. Its not a great terrain, nor is it terrible. However, it is "OK" so that is what I voted. Keep on terraining! Its always good to improve your terrains too, even if they're not for a real playable map.

~Craka_J

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

Too random, bad choice of doodads, bad camera angle, good tile variation. Overall not too great, but there's always room for improvement.

 

[money-meow]

Good tilevariation, but the placement of your doodads look random and cluttered. The terrain looks very busy. Its not a great terrain, nor is it terrible. However, it is "OK" so that is what I voted. Keep on terraining! Its always good to improve your terrains too, even if they're not for a real playable map.

~Craka_J

Alright! That is what I will do!

Too random, bad choice of doodads, bad camera angle, good tile variation. Overall not too great, but there's always room for improvement.

Alright, thanks for the info

 

[Oziris]

I dont really like it why dont u show the pictures with sky i mean dont just show ground and it needs fog.It's bad and the grass dosent fit as well as the Mushrooms

 

[Nudl9]

Nice random terrain, but could need something unique and original...

 

[money-meow]

Nice random terrain, but could need something unique and original...

Such as? What do you mean?

 

[DungeonM]

Such as? What do you mean?

There's nothing going for this terrain, its just a bunch of trees and mushrooms. And while others said the tile variation was good I disagree. Throwing down a bunch of random tiles dosen't make a good terrain. Even things in nature aren't that random, at least most of the time.

 

[Deathcom3s]

Everyone said what's needed to be said, it's plain, and seems random, but you have great tile variation, just try to work on the placement of your doodads.

 

[Gilles]

There's nothing going for this terrain, its just a bunch of trees and mushrooms. And while others said the tile variation was good I disagree. Throwing down a bunch of random tiles dosen't make a good terrain. Even things in nature aren't that random, at least most of the time.

I disagree with your disagreement. I think tile variation can look fine random. I still sometimes just splotch it around.

 

[Darth_Muppet]

Pretty good for a first terrain The tile variation is good but the doodads sorta seem jumbled and random. The terrain just needs to be a bit less... messy... But good job

 

[Deathcom3s]

I didn't say the tile variation was bad, it's pretty good, i was talking about the random doodad placement.

 

[money-meow]

Pretty good for a first terrain The tile variation is good but the doodads sorta seem jumbled and random. The terrain just needs to be a bit less... messy... But good job

It's sort of supposed to be messy, the world is is like a planet no one has ever been to.

 

[Nudl9]

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nudl9
Nice random terrain, but could need something unique and original...

Such as? What do you mean?

I mean you should have something in focus, like a road in middle, a waterfall, a cool mix with terrain or doodads, while around it there is random doodads and stuff.

 

[money-meow]

I mean you should have something in focus, like a road in middle, a waterfall, a cool mix with terrain or doodads, while around it there is random doodads and stuff.

Ah, now I understand, next time I make terrain I'll try to keep that in mind.

I didn't say the tile variation was bad, it's pretty good, i was talking about the random doodad placement.

Thank you for that comment than.