My first model

[Solst1ce]

Hey, well as the title says this is my first model, a crossbow attachment using the demolisher texture, and I'd like to know what to improve - just some common feedback. Thanks in advance.

 

[arthas_king]

Hey there, that's nice, the only thing to improve is to add something that the units can use to shot the arrow and an arrow on it.Good for 1st model anyway. ^^

 

[ikillforeyou]

Very good for a first. You have a future in modeling! =]

 

[chilla_killa]

The UV mapping is very good. +rep
Keep on learning and improving you skils.

 

[HappyTauren]

Overpolied.

 

[Solst1ce]

*updated*
Yes, it's overpolied. It turned more and more out to be a joke with a friend of mine, so meh.

Well thanks for the kind words, but the only reason for creating it was because I couldn't find a propper model for my map.

No, it's not big, it's badass.

 

[ikillforeyou]

That must hurt, is the string pointyk, or is his army plaster? :0

 

[Th3IndianCannon]

Looks nice. What program are you using and how did you learn? I would like to try.

 

[Solst1ce]

That must hurt, is the string pointyk, or is his army plaster? :0

Neither of those.. the whole thing is covert advertising for.. new generation piercings.. or so.. "Never lose your favourite item again!" - you've got the point, eh.

 

[ikillforeyou]

Whut the heck is up with my spelling? "That must hurt, is the string pointy, or is his arm plaster? :0"*

 

[Devine]

The wrap needs some fixing and ... as Happy Tauren stated before, itlooks like you used tons of polies.

 

[Taylor Mouse]

A side from the polycount ( as we already stated is too high ) I like the model, now try to get it down to a few polys

T.