My first *complete* skin.

[frankie11]

I worked on this for several hours and feel that it is a good skin. Everything that is edited is freehand except for the hair-- I used filters for that :O)


Comments appreciated!!! ~frankie11

 

[donut3.5]

Show some ingame wraps please!
--donut3.5--

 

[frankie11]

I can't--- I don't have WC3 Installed anymore--- i had to reformat. If you would like to provide a wrap, I can give you the .blp.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

I downloaded the skin you uploaded from the resource section and applied
it to the Arthas model via Warcraft III Viewer.

I'm guessing you are using some of these skinning techniques.
The armor parts are oversmudged, wich looks very nasty. I suggest you take a look at TDR's skinning tutorials.

 

[Fulla]

You can use war3 viewer to gain screenshots.

 

[Kimbo]

You can use war3 viewer to gain screenshots.

yeah..and you need wc3 installed =_=

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It doesn't look very good ingame.Need more work but it's quite good for a new one!

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

It looks OK, but you need to work on it somemore.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It needs much more work i would add...

 

[Mechanical Man]

Hehe, that cape reminds me my tryings to skin.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

The armor is not very good made.Improving it will improve the whole skin.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

Hehe, that cape reminds me my tryings to skin.

Yeah, same with me. Exept I think I did worse than that.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

The cape could be changed too!!Yet,the skin need improvements.I would give it a 6/10 but with a lot of potential.

 

[frankie11]

Thank you all, I will work on it some more and take your comments into consideration :O). I knew that the armor may not look good at first so, I'll redo it. Thank you.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Ok,we are waiting for the next version of your skin!

 

[frankie11]

New Updates

Took y'all's advice on the armor. All completely redone. Hope you like it. I even redid the belt buckle because the face was a little cheesy.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

It looks much better now.Work a bit more on the hammer i suggest.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

It looks a little bit better, but you didnt change much it looks like..

 

[Revolve]

You might want to have it in that way, but an improvement could be that you use some different colors, like red in outer parts of the shoulderpads and chest. I don't know why you have those straight lines over whole armor, it doesn't look like "scars". Plz remove them.

Anyways, good skin for being first skin.

 

[frankie11]

I have finished the skin. I redid the cape and dulled down the "scratch n' dent" hope you like it!

EDIT: To Revolve-- If you like this version better tell me. (The one w/ garnet shoulders.)

 

[THE_END]

You need to lessen the damn lighting you made
It looks horrible on the shoulders and chest
And that chainmail needs a serious alternative

 

[frankie11]

Well, god sor- effing -ry but that IS the point on CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIQUE. Not, "this s*** sux- do this, do that." I think the lighting is fine for the style I'm trying to achieve. And btw- that chainmail looks FINE in-game. Anyways, what I'm trying to tell you is- I'm much less receptive to comments that are not backed up and are just meant to bring someone else's work down.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

I liked the 2nd version of your last WIPs.It looks cooler.

 

[Revolve]

No, the new version doesn't look so much better. It looks like a recolor, and it seems that you just picked a place and colored it. Test to color some more places, and change the color to a more "redder" (not so much recolorish) one.
Still, i think you could remove the straight lines that are supposed to look like scars - they ruin the effect.

 

[SuPa-]

Chainmail is overall... a bitch. I suggest you make a big chainmail ring, size it down to about 5/5 pixels, duplicate it alot, and then apply shading

 

[FireEffect]

I never use chainmail, ever since that chainmail tut came out its been popular. I dont think it looks very good, and the tutorial didnt show a very good way of shading it.

 

[THE_END]

Ok well let's see
Let me "critique your skin"
Lessen your shading, there is too much
Do something besides chainmail, maybe just plain plate armor
And I would leave the hair like it was in the original skin

 

[frankie11]

UPDATED: Changed the hair a bit, added a beard and lessened the shading as THE_END said to do.

 

[THE_END]

Ok now to add some shading onto the beard on the face, hair, and eyebrows
Then try to do something with that chainmail please

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

What I can suggest is changing the design on the book, and on the inside, but remember that page gets mirrored. His belt buckle looks very good, is it like that medieval archery rose thingybob? The platemail is good except it looks too white, it could use darkening. The chainmail on his leg is good. Next time could you please attach the original wrap so we can easily compare. Yes, shading on the hair would do well. Other than that your skin is of good standards! +Rep.

 

[frankie11]

The belt buckle was just a made up thing in my head... thanks for the great comments I appreciate them.