My attempt lol

[Capcy]

Hopefully this is the right area..

I got rather bored.. So i decided to make some terrain.. Im still very noobish at terraining.. but here goes..

Any help on improving this would be great.

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[demonsofdante]

One of the key problems of course is the floating doodads. They detract from the natural image and cause the viewer to realize "oh its just warcraft" lol.
THis can be fixed with a simple high adjustment. Use Ctrl+Page up and
Ctrl+Page down to fix this. Or place shrubbery or other natural objects in the way to cover that part.

Also, try varying sizes to the doodads, such as the rocks. It gives it a more natural feeling and keeps the viewer from looking at too much of the same thing.

Height variation of the ground surrounding the lake would also help the picture


Overall, good work on it though. A few touchups and it will be great

 

[The_wand_mirror]

lol for a noob in terrain this looks good! consider urself average?

 

[Capcy]

lol.. thanks.. ill probably try another map.. and see how it goes.. ill use all of my knowledge ..

 

[Deep Sea Kraken]

Its good. The trees on the edge of the water look kinda funky. Also maybe add a few shallow parts in the water. And maybe some fish.

 

[Deckboy]

The trees by/on the cliff are "floating"

 

[Capcy]

yea i noticed that.

im doing a new map with hopefully playable conditions.

its not going to be big, but the doodad count might be risky.