Maiev Shadowsong the Warden

[CeDiL]

Removed because people were stealing.

 

[cleavinghammer]

For Razor Gale: Replace "Your hero's" with "her".

Fan of Knives: mention that damage is dependant on agility.

One thing to say about Tenacity: The name is pretty much the opposite of what it does (the spell sounds as though the Warden sacrifices speed and attack to boost defense and reduce damage). How about something like All Or Nothing, (if she doesn't kill the unit fast with the boost, she won't last long).

And if I understand correctly, her Ultimate is a passive ability that gives her a chance to poison with any of her abilities including attacks. My suggestion for the tooltip is this:

The Warden's moon-blade and cloak are coated with Crippling Poison. Anytime the Warden does damage (including via abilities), she has a 15% chance to do damage depending on Maiev's Agility and slowthe target's movement and attack speed.
Cannot occur on the same target twice if it is poisoned already.

 

[CeDiL]

Tenacity doesn't make it's attack weaker the only "-" that it does is the 175% total damage during it's duration.

Yay! Post 100!
Yes i will correct this, anything else?

(including via abilities)

Actualy my initial concept was to make a Lore-like tooltip with stuff for example "Hero embues his helmet with the power of the sun or" smth. and i don't want "(" ")" in them can you suggest another one?

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Okay, I will make all descriptions about all spells soon.

 

[Lich Prince]

I got a couple of names for that "noname" ability:
-Velocity Shift
-Predatory Skill
-Rapid Movement

They're not that good i guess...but neither is the tooltip. You can ask Apheraz Lucent over there for help with that.

Btw, remove the "depending on Maiev's agility." part in the Fan of Knives description and ability. 0.25 Agility does very low damage compared to the original damage of the ability.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Razor Gale: (My names for it: Shadow Dance, Demon Raze, Lethal Surge)
My description for it:
Maiev's speed goes to that point where she surges towards targeted point, slashing any enemy in her wake. Damage dealt it based on her Agility.

Fan of Knives (My name for it: Blade Dance)
My description for it:
The Warden spins around, hurling deadly blades at nearby enemy units. Each blade does damage dependent on her Agility.

? (My names for it: Lethal Lust, Punitive Gain, Fortune Reversal, Repercussion)
My description for it:
Maiev is capable of showing destructive force with her dying breath. She sacrifices her Strength to gain a temporal boost to her Agility that lasts for 12 seconds. Such a poweful transformation weakens her, making any damage she takes increased by 75%.

Crippling Strike (My names for it: Envenomed Talons, Cursed Strike, Imploding Slash, Lunar Strike)
My description for it:
Maiev's knowledge of deadly venoms goes to a higher level, where she wraps her moon blade and cloak with the most powerful one she can create. Whenever she damages an enemy unit, she has a 15% chance to cut a deep wound and inject her poison in it. The poison will deal damage based on her Agility and implode a strong slowing pulse, rendering to slow target's attack and movement speeds. Cannot occur twice on the same target if it is already poisoned.

 

[Lich Prince]

Razor Gale: (My names for it: Shadow Dance, Demon Raze, Lethal Surge)
My description for it:
Maiev's speed goes to that point where she surges towards targeted point, slashing any enemy in her wake. Damage dealt it based on her Agility.

Fan of Knives (My name for it: Blade Dance)
My description for it:
The Warden spins around, hurling deadly blades at nearby enemy units. Each blade does damage dependent on her Agility.

? (My names for it: Lethal Lust, Punitive Gain, Fortune Reversal, Repercussion)
My description for it:
Maiev is capable of showing destructive force with her dying breath. She sacrifices her Strength to gain a temporal boost to her Agility that lasts for 12 seconds. Such a poweful transformation weakens her, making any damage she takes increased by 75%.

Crippling Strike (My names for it: Envenomed Talons, Cursed Strike, Imploding Slash, Lunar Strike)
My description for it:
Maiev's knowledge of deadly venoms goes to a higher level, where she wraps her moon blade and cloak with the most powerful one she can create. Whenever she damages an enemy unit, she has a 15% chance to cut a deep wound and inject her poison in it. The poison will deal damage based on her Agility and implode a strong slowing pulse, rendering to slow target's attack and movement speeds. Cannot occur twice on the same target if it is already poisoned.

Ok. Seriously. Wow.

That is as amazing as it can sound. Those descriptions look like Blizzard's-wait, no...better. CeDil, dude...He just made your Hero a God hehe. CnP that and fix the damage desc., its abit confusing. (place the "x" between the 0.25 and agility - 0.25xAgility...).

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Ok. Seriously. Wow.

That is as amazing as it can sound. Those descriptions look like Blizzard's-wait, no...better. CeDil, dude...He just made your Hero a God hehe. CnP that and fix the damage desc., its abit confusing. (place the "x" between the 0.25 and agility - 0.25xAgility...).

Oh, lol, seems to me like I just got a killing spree ^^
Thanks for your opinion. I really appreciate it. When you create more heroes, I can make more descriptions :3
Btw (By the way), here are examples of hero levels descriptions:

Razor Gale:
Level 1 - 50 + 0.5 per Agility point damage.

Fan of Knives
Level 1 - 25% of Agility as damage.

?
Level 1 - 25% Strength to Agility.

Crippling Strike
Level 1 - 33% of Agility in Damage; 25% Attack, 50% Movement Speed Reduction.

 

[CeDiL]

Damn this is awesome! Thanks a LOT! Can i ask for further help with my heroes? I will credit you in my map as text-designer.
I really can't find words how AWESOME this is! Thanks again!

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Apheraz Lucent, is the Hero-tooltip good in your oppinion?

Please don't double post. Delete one thread, you can get negative rep if someone sees it :S
And I wouldn't like it
Sure, I can make even more descriptions. You just tell me what.
About your hero description:
It is good. Very good. Frigin' awesome
Hey, I noticed a thing. It's spelled awesome, not aweRsome

 

[CeDiL]

I mean, her story : Hero Introduction

Night elf wardens are elite members of the Watchers, the jailors and marshalls of night elf society. These mystical assassins mete out justice, capture fugitives and carry out covert executions. Trained in martial arts, wardens command a fearsome and formidable range of abilities. Using a combination of cunning, stealth and tactical planning, a warden can shake even a large fighting force to its core. Maiev prefers to strike vulnerable targets from surprise, she throws a slicing torrent against lesser opponents, or uses her Fan of Knives if surrounded, her serrated, hoop-shaped moon sword is a deadly weapon for both subduing and executing the warden's quarry.

It's basicly a cnp from wowwiki, take a look and tell me what you think please.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

I mean, her story : Hero Introduction

Night elf wardens are elite members of the Watchers, the jailors and marshalls of night elf society. These mystical assassins mete out justice, capture fugitives and carry out covert executions. Trained in martial arts, wardens command a fearsome and formidable range of abilities. Using a combination of cunning, stealth and tactical planning, a warden can shake even a large fighting force to its core. Maiev prefers to strike vulnerable targets from surprise, she throws a slicing torrent against lesser opponents, or uses her Fan of Knives if surrounded, her serrated, hoop-shaped moon sword is a deadly weapon for both subduing and executing the warden's quarry.

It's basicly a cnp from wowwiki, take a look and tell me what you think please.

Already took a look at it, and I liked it. Quite as good as I can write.

 

[Lich Prince]

It looks great in my opinion and if A.L. can edit it abit it can look even better. Maybe remove some unwanted parts in the hero description? I doubt it will fit in the editor right now.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Maybe this one can fit:

The mysterious Wardens serve as the night elves' special police force in Kalimdor, the jailors and marshalls of night elf society. Set apart from the militant Sentinels, wardens are usually employed as jailors, assassins, and bounty hunters, but their usual task is to hunt down criminals and carry out covert executions. Maiev, the representative leader of the Wardens, employs a number of supernatural powers to recapture her pray and mete out the night elves' justice. She throws a slicing torrent against lesser opponents, or uses her Fan of Knives if surrounded. Her unmatchable dexterity is invaluable, and by her serrated, hoop-shaped moon sword, she outmaneuvers even the quickest of foes.

What you think?

 

[CeDiL]

This is much, much better, Thank You!

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

No problem

 

[CeDiL]

Okay this thread can be closed i got all i needed and even more from it!