madman9800-Spooky Mansion

[madman9800]

This is a spooky looking mansion in a blighted forest. No imports are used. Feedback is appreciated Thanks

EDIT: Screen shots updated (thank you Huurka and Mechmap for the suggestions

-added more tree variation
-added rocks on cliff
-added a few more doodads near the mansion
-tried to fix sky i dont think it worked
-changed atmosphere (i think it looks better with moon light)
-made the mountain a bit more smooth
-added MUCH more tile variation
-fixed the boxes in the 1st and 3rd screen shot

Again, thank you Huurka and Mechmap for your suggestions.

 

[Huurka]

Could use some tree variation. Very good.

 

[Mechmap]

Tree variation as Huurka said and add more doodads to it, like rocks.

Also the weather fog is a little strange in the screenshot since it just appear in some places.

And what about the brazers on the roof? I dont think they look very good.

The sky is a bit messed up in first and third picture.

The mountain itself looks kinda strange, try to smooth it and add more tile variation, mostly poison and blight in that picture.

You can see purple boxes in pic 1 and 2.

Though it doesnt look so good, it would surely be good for playable I think.

(600 post. Yej!)

 

[madman9800]

Thank you guys for your feed back, i dont konw how i can do more tree variations, this is made with no imports and thats the only tree that really fit into this style...oh wait, i could use the northern trees and darken them...ok ill update haha, thank you both Huurka and Mechmap

EDIT: I have updated the screenshots, please have a look at my first post to see them.

 

[Mechmap]

Looks much better, though I would put rain instead of moon rays and put dark green fog instead of red. It fits better with felwood sky.

 

[Naze]

Looks much better, though I would put rain instead of moon rays and put dark green fog instead of red. It fits better with felwood sky.

Agreed.


Please, listen to Mechmap...

 

[FamousPker49]

Not only does are red and green complimentary colors, but the sky and fog don't match. Make it day time, use a greenish fog, or change the tiles, or possibly a dark black fog.

Third Screen you can see the end of the world.

 

[Darkey]

Might just be me but I don't think that the poison tile fits as a road at all. Otherwise pretty nice. Maybe decorate a little more.

 

[Dr. House]

i whas thinking of somthing els im disapointed snif snif use more tree variation and i think the sky and fog doenst match