Lost Warrior.BLP

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I3lackDeath Awaiting Update [tr]

Date: 2013/Feb/11 18:57:11 Reasons: You still haven't fixed the vines on his boots - they still makes this skin look very messy. Think about changing the design of the boots. There's hardly any way you can make vines work with how the texture is wrapped around them.​ ​ ​ Staff Contact Submission Rules

23:49, 6th Feb 2013

Kwaliti: The vines make this look totally messy. Try making them a bit more glued to the concept. Also, the shoulders wrap weird.

01:00, 28th Aug 2011

Magtheridon96: His face still looks like it is made out of metal.
The necessary changes were not made.

19:22, 7th Aug 2011

shiiK: You seem to have updated this after my last comment, but I don't see the necessary changes. Moving this to rejected (until updated).

17:35, 23rd Jul 2011

shiiK: Much improvement has been made, but why is his face shining like it was made out of metal? You also need to rework those scales, they are fairly large. Lastly, add more shading. The torso gives the impression of being a square box rather than a human body.

16:13, 24th Jun 2011

shiiK: Needs more shading, new shield, changes to the face. There's also a few issues with the wrap (shoulders and chest) and a few glitches - don't leave parts of the model covered in parts that are not part of the design. The scales on his scale mail should be smaller.

 

[-W3SK3R-]

It's Warrior not Worrior. -.- And i think this one is fine.

 

[kris4o]

i know that but i am too lazy to fix it.

 

[Misha]

hm, it looks cool, although I'm not sure to what level of free hand it is..

 

[Ceaps]

Nice skin.
More better that the old skins.
But it still need some hard work.
Like the screen.

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

Is this skin made by you? And I suggest putting team colors instead of the green parts

 

[kris4o]

Yes.
Why you ask?
I thing you right but it will make the skin look horrible.
If you whant i will show you the old one.

 

[-W3SK3R-]

He is the owner...

 

[kris4o]

i have updated it.

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

First,you need proof,and don't post here if you update it,I don't really doubt you through

 

[RollBoat]

Nice skin.
Usefull.

 

[Dentothor]

there really isnt a 75% freehand content here...

 

[eubz]

Is this skin made by you? And I suggest putting team colors instead of the green parts

Yes. I think green parts should be replaced with team color.

 

[Marcos DAB]

Please use a in-game screenshot. Overall seems good.

 

[Legion_King]

Weird Mustache he got.

 

[Orcnet]

the head looks great but the rest, meh ))':

 

[Tleno]

The shield is just too bright and too contrastive...

 

[chr2]

That shield looks hideous and does not follow the theme of the rest of the skin. I'd suggest changing it into a wooden or metallic shield or something. Just not green. Also, get rid of the vines. As for the amount of freehand, I believe there is enough. To me it looks like only the face is partly unedited. Correct me if I am wrong. Anyways, as many have said before me, you are definitely improving. This is by far your best skin, though still not approvable in this state. Keep it up like this, and it'll get approved.

EDIT: Whoops, just saw the lore you made for these fellars. Aight, then you should probably keep the vines. Heck, you should probably even add some more. Just change the shield, will ya?

 

[Tleno]

probably they should be even more monstrous - all the face cowered in wines and leafs, some crazy eye or whatever else.
And yes, you should definetly change the shield, it's the worst part of the skin.

 

[RollBoat]

Scary face.
The sheild looks much better now.
Nice work.

 

[Ilike]

Love how you made the face.

 

[Tleno]

Those black edges on shield look ugly and bad.
but the face is awesome.

 

[Blood Raven]

Overall it's nice, but still could use some updates...
3/5

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

Fix the team color of the shoulder plate please,your doing fine,keep going

 

[Misha]

honestly it looks awful.. you completely missed the theme you were trying to do

I mean.. if the jungle took over those men, there should be a lot of rusted or totally destroyed metal, which certainly ain't shiny at all.. also their skin would change to something.. froggy? in texture.. not to mention loosing all hair or that being replaced with plant-stuff..

EDIT:

Here's a neat example how a man cursed to the jungle should look, as a guideline..

 

[Tleno]

Misha, don't you think that, well, these men spent a bit less time in some cursed forest to change into a completely different creature? I mean imagine a map/campaing where at begining you encounter only those slightly changed lost warriors, while the much stronger and mutated creatures like Cursed Tresspasser appear later. See, this is like somewhat of basic unit.

 

[Misha]

I'm only giving guidelines

 

[darkdeathknight]

Man, you made the beaten metal texture on the shield perfectly.

 

[kris4o]

honestly it looks awful.. you completely missed the theme you were trying to do

I mean.. if the jungle took over those men, there should be a lot of rusted or totally destroyed metal, which certainly ain't shiny at all.. also their skin would change to something.. froggy? in texture.. not to mention loosing all hair or that being replaced with plant-stuff..

EDIT:

Here's a neat example how a man cursed to the jungle should look, as a guideline..

they may be become monsters but that didn't make them without brains.
Thouse warriors are more smart that you think.They keept their human
part.They have build a new stronghold in the jungle without knowing that they exist.
Nice from you tho help but you see now,the monsters are not allways have rusty armour and not allways stubit.

 

[8512590215848]

looks realy dirity and messy.

 

[Cyberatog]

I for one, do not believe the "scales" need to get any smaller, as they are clearly lamellar plating, not scales.

What does need improvement however, is how the straps connect across his chest, as due to the wrap, they do not cross properly. I also wonder why his facial hair has turned extremely red, but I guess gingers are evil.

 

[-W3SK3R-]

Comeone approved this there are more worst skins then this.

 

[Fingolfin]

I think you got some of the details down nicely the shield looks really nice, but the overall concept just feels confusing to me. I understand what you are trying to do, but you use such a crazy mix of colors that it is hard for anyone to see that he is supposed to have been devoured by the forest. Many of the colors are too bright/saturated, the green almost looks neon and very unnatural, and then you have some bright red/orange, yellow and blue thrown in that just adds confusion. You can keep the moustache as it is, but please change the blue and yellow on his axe to something else. Also, i don't think you have gone far enough on the "nature" aspect of it, he looks mostly like a soldier with a couple of vines on him, and his armour is mostly untouched (apart from some rust which you did nicely). You should add a subtle tone of green to some of it, and maybe just add some moss in places to add to the effect.

 

[RiotZ]

I really like this, I don't know what's up with Shiik's rating.

 

[Ketsuno Anson]

I really like this, I don't know what's up with Shiik's rating.

If you doubt a mod's ability to mod,you always can pm ralle about it

 

[Ceaps]

oh come on.Can someone approve this.
Kris4o broke his ass working on it.

 

[chr2]

The armor looks great. The only problem I have is the face. It looks metallic rather than flesh-like, which makes it look as if he was wearing to helmets, one melting in with his face.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Better!

 

[kris4o]

I changed the face to an ugly mutant face.
Now i just need to wait for approvement.

 

[Ceaps]

well its mutch more better naw but i can't say that its ugly mutant face.
More like jungle man face.

 

[Halfent]

cool skin.

 

[kris4o]

updated it.Edited some of the details(FOOT).

 

[Tank-Commander]

looks like you went a bit crazy with the sharpen tool

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Toooooo sharpen!

 

[sonofjay]

Yup too sharp.

 

[clockwork2]

he doesn't look mutated much, I think he should have holes in his armor where vines grow out of a wound.
Maybe it's just me.

 

[knight26]

Do i see plastic warp and sharpener filters used?.
Matter of fact - not enough freehand

 

[chr2]

Do i see plastic warp and sharpener filters used?.
Matter of fact - not enough freehand

There's definitely enough freehand.

I don't like his new face though, it's too blurry and lacks highlights.

 

[bhusta]

you are the king of pending