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Lost Warrior.BLP

Submitted by kris4o
This bundle is marked as substandard. It may contain bugs, not perform optimally or otherwise be in violation of the submission rules.
lost warriors.They are called that becouse they are mutated into jungle monsters when they found a one ancient stone.


Edited the shield.
Added tem color.
Edited the face.
Edited the armour.


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Keywords:
Jungle,Lost,Warrior,Mutant,Monster
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Lost Warrior (Texture)

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[img]I3lackDeath [img] [tr]Awaiting Update[c]Date: 2013/Feb/11 18:57:11 Reasons:You still haven't fixed the vines on his boots - they still makes this skin look very messy. Think about changing the design of the boots. There's hardly any way you...
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    Awaiting Update
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    2013/Feb/11 18:57:11

    Reasons:
    You still haven't fixed the vines on his boots - they still makes this skin look very messy.
    Think about changing the design of the boots.
    There's hardly any way you can make vines work with how the texture is wrapped around them.​



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    23:49, 6th Feb 2013

    Kwaliti: The vines make this look totally messy. Try making them a bit more glued to the concept. Also, the shoulders wrap weird.


    01:00, 28th Aug 2011

    Magtheridon96: His face still looks like it is made out of metal.
    The necessary changes were not made.


    19:22, 7th Aug 2011

    shiiK: You seem to have updated this after my last comment, but I don't see the necessary changes. Moving this to rejected (until updated).


    17:35, 23rd Jul 2011
    shiiK: Much improvement has been made, but why is his face shining like it was made out of metal? You also need to rework those scales, they are fairly large. Lastly, add more shading. The torso gives the impression of being a square box rather than a human body.

    16:13, 24th Jun 2011
    shiiK: Needs more shading, new shield, changes to the face. There's also a few issues with the wrap (shoulders and chest) and a few glitches - don't leave parts of the model covered in parts that are not part of the design. The scales on his scale mail should be smaller.
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  2. -W3SK3R-

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    It's Warrior not Worrior. -.- And i think this one is fine.
     
  3. kris4o

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    i know that but i am too lazy to fix it.
     
  4. Misha

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    hm, it looks cool, although I'm not sure to what level of free hand it is.. o_O
     
  5. Ceaps

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    Nice skin.
    More better that the old skins.
    But it still need some hard work.
    Like the screen.
     
  6. Ketsuno Anson

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    Is this skin made by you? And I suggest putting team colors instead of the green parts
     
  7. kris4o

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    Yes.
    Why you ask?
    I thing you right but it will make the skin look horrible.
    If you whant i will show you the old one.
     
    Last edited: Jun 21, 2011
  8. -W3SK3R-

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    He is the owner...
     
  9. kris4o

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    i have updated it.
     
  10. Ketsuno Anson

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    First,you need proof,and don't post here if you update it,I don't really doubt you through
     
  11. RollBoat

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    Nice skin.
    Usefull.
     
  12. Dentothor

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    there really isnt a 75% freehand content here...
     
  13. eubz

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    Yes. I think green parts should be replaced with team color.
     
  14. Marcos DAB

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    Please use a in-game screenshot. Overall seems good.
     
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    Weird Mustache he got.
     
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    the head looks great but the rest, meh ))':
     
  17. Tleno

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    The shield is just too bright and too contrastive...
     
  18. chr2

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    That shield looks hideous and does not follow the theme of the rest of the skin. I'd suggest changing it into a wooden or metallic shield or something. Just not green. Also, get rid of the vines. As for the amount of freehand, I believe there is enough. To me it looks like only the face is partly unedited. Correct me if I am wrong. Anyways, as many have said before me, you are definitely improving. This is by far your best skin, though still not approvable in this state. Keep it up like this, and it'll get approved.

    EDIT: Whoops, just saw the lore you made for these fellars. Aight, then you should probably keep the vines. Heck, you should probably even add some more. Just change the shield, will ya?
     
    Last edited: Jun 25, 2011
  19. Tleno

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    probably they should be even more monstrous - all the face cowered in wines and leafs, some crazy eye or whatever else.
    And yes, you should definetly change the shield, it's the worst part of the skin.