Lost Temple Hero Lich King

[Daffa]

MAJOR [MUST FIX]:

1. Lacks screenshot of gameplay
2. The map description doesn't explain in detail about the map itself.
3. Please have some control over the number, there's no need to bloat in high number unless it's necessary
4. Many tooltips are missing, please write them properly. Tooltips are important for new players to understand the heroes and items (and for sake of clarity, avoid writing THIS WAY. It's making it hard to read properly)
5. Human and Undead doesn't have balanced amount of value
6. Always credit resources used

MINOR:

1. I suggest to lock down the player with spawn into an AI player and if you intend to have 4v4, add one more slot for each side
2. Please don't use dragon icon for Piercing, it's destroying the clarity
3. If units aren't supposed to have upgrades, please remove their upgrades so the ugly 0 doesn't appear in their weapon/armor
4. Make sure to disable hero once player makes their selection.

SUGGESTIONS:

1. I appreciate your effort to upload here, but please use Map Development if it's still in progress.
2. Always read the Map Submission Rules before submitting. We have some quality control so please help us by following them.
3. Use World Editor Help Zone if you need help in implementing something.

Thank you for the submission, but unless a huge amount of changes are made, I have to set it to Substandard.

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[TheoneGT]

aw... xD im so bad i must do all this if the map be at least playble>? i will try to do all this and upload better one maybe .you are so good maker? you know alot!! btw thx!!!!