Lost Tample

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Date: 12-Jul-13 (11:46:26)​

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Your Map has low quality terrain.

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Personal Comment:​

Map terrain is decent, looks balanced and there is enough space for building, but problem are tiles and doodads.
Temple or whatever located on center is empty.
You should add more doodads there and add some more randomness to whole place.
There is no enough trees near starting locations to support 13k gold mine. Same for expansions.
Don't drop 2 items from same unit.
There is no artifact drop.

Map Status: Rejected
(1/5) Unacceptable​

 

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[WolfFarkas]

reserved for review

hey buddy since a wile, a new map of yours
i will review it after eat

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abgm's review ***Lost Temple*** Map Overview ***It is a good and original 1vs1 melee map*** What I liked: *** -starting locations and enough neutral buildings -terraining and tile use -creeps and loot system seems good enough to me -the general design, the temple in the midle rounded by water and wild terrain *** What could be improved: *** i have only one thing in mind and is some water parts to avoid ugly sharp, but this is the only thing i see bad *** Screenshots [tr] Hidden [/URL] Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/IMG] [/URL] Uploaded with ImageShack.us[/IMG] Screeshots bbcodes Generator By Vengeancekael

 

[CroMoX]

The middle temple thing is slanted to the bottom making the entrance step outside smaller on the bottom than the top by a substantial amount. I would try to move it up so you can add decor outside of the temple.

This is what I can see from screenshot, but I will come back and have a proper look (on phone)

Editor Review:
- The temple itself is very bland, involving no doodads what so ever
- The temple is off from the centre making one side have a smaller entrance taking away from the terrain
- No animals. You should add an albatross here and there, or skinks or crabs
- Use the viny plant doodad a bit more around trees. I know you have used it, but it makes it feel decaded, which suits the sunken tileset.

The terrain is nice, with some decent height variation, but can bit a bit bland here and there. I will give it a 3/5, and if you update to what I said I can give it a 4/5, and expand further a 5/5

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

A very nice 1vs1 melee map.My opinion is that you can add custom races alongside with the main 4 ones so the players can chose from them for a more variable gameplay.
Nice map 4/5