[Campaign] Looking for help from a Skilled campaign maker

[NoctissOHC24_omni]

I have been developing maps before on my old acc but all of those were Battle Arena or Something wars and that kind of thing and i never did a campaign because when i played the ones posted here i felt like i couldnt do something like that but now i feel like i want to try, so if any skilled campaign maker could help me by giving feedback on ideas that i came up with so far i would be very thankful