Laptop With Wc3(Update 2)

[Moderator]

07:27, 25th Jan 2009
General Frank:

Edit having two exactly same resources is not allowed. Update your models and do not post new ones.

Yeah, you should fix the black parts. PM me back if you need help, but I won't do all the work.

 

[Myth_Zero]

Comment From hellblazer-14:
Heya

Well I like the mesh, it's good, but the texture and the wrap is baad :/

You should add a little more detail, so you can actually see keys on the keyboard (or something, on just black), and add a few imperfections to the white (scratches, bumps, something like that), it's a little difficult to distinguish atm.

FInally, you should take a screeshot of the main wc3 screen, or a glue screen maybe, it would look way better. If you look closely, you can see that the top edges of the screenshot kinda drape towards the outside of the model. You need fix the wrap, so it looks straight.

Other than that, good attempt. The mesh is fine, just make sure to update the texture.
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hellblazer-14 this is now with keyboard and it have its main wc3 screen
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[anarchianbedlam]

WARNING: this model should be deleted and instead, update your other model. two similar resources will get you in trouble

 

[Vincent]

This model would be cool for some realistic type maps or "sims" type ones!

5/5 from me!

 

[Power]

add death animation and stand animation. 3/5

 

[SrebrniLav]

Great Model! I didn't know that laptops can build

 

[hellblazer-14]

There you go, much better already! Looks better with the main screen, and I also like the keyboard a lot.
But make sure, that like Pyritie said, you UPDATE your previous model *there's a special button at the top left of the page for that function*, instead of uploading the remade second version as a second model.

Great job now.
Consider getting someone to make an animation of the laptop opening, and one of it closing (if you can't make it yourself, that is ;p)
4/5 from me now.

 

[Dimi.96.srb]

xD what a model nice

 

[Luckerguy]

I wouldnt know where to use it...

 

[Konsai]

Looks pretty good. Pretty good for such a model.

Btw you could use this for post-apocalyptic adventures, you know? Computer Labs and so on.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

Much better now, but fix the potrait!

 

[D a w n]

work on the wrap. It looks really bad right now. And the texture could need some work too because it looks really blurry right now.
And some animations could be good too.

 

[MGCǂSpectre]

Sorry but just because it has a texture of war3 main screen doesn't mean it's good. The mesh is ok though. Maybe it's the idea 'laptop with war3' and model. meh

 

[Bloody_Turds]

CAN I GET AN I
CAN I GET AN N
CAN I GET AN G
CAN I GET AN A
CAN I GET AN M
CAN I GET AN E
CAN I GET AN Textures!!

seriously.. there are metalic textures ingame and even a keyboard texture somewhere in the mpq... as for the screen use wc3 logo or sumthin ingame XD...

 

[Myth_Zero]

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