Kirin v1.1

[Daffa]

This is the first spell involved anime for me, so yeah

Anyway, gonna post another spell that I worked on a long time on tomorrow or so. I got stressed out so I try to relieve it with some simpler spells to make, which results in this.

 

[MyPad]

I think the spell is too simple (war stomp effect on spell finish event). If you don't mind adding a little bit of complexity, I suggest adding some lightning effects when channeling, centered at the user.

 

[Daffa]

Will add the requested complexity, give me a day for it.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Lovely! Anyway, did anyone allow you to use my jutsu?

 

[Daffa]

Ah, that's on public sphere ya know?

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Ok ok. I'll burrow one of my sharingans to you. You need to use it to perfect the jutsu

 

[Daffa]

Updated.

 

[MyPad]

Notes:

• The spell-caster has to channel the entire ability for its' total duration, and it cannot do anything else. (Is this behavior intended?)

Nitpicks:

• Perhaps damage could be inversely proportional to distance. (You can make this a configurable part)

Overview:

• The spell is quite simple, yet I do not see any instances leaking here.
• The concept of the spell is solid and oddly familiar, which affects its' originality. The spell's simplicity in implementation may be the cause of this.
• In real-time gameplay, it is unlikely for the caster to finish channeling the spell due to stuns, ensnares, and disables that abound (though this is also configurable).
• Damage dealt, as stated above, could be made inversely proportional.
• Yet, the spell works, and is MUI, as far as my tests show. A nice example of SpellSystem being in use.

Status:

• Approved

 

[Daffa]

Notes:

• The spell-caster has to channel the entire ability for its' total duration, and it cannot do anything else. (Is this behavior intended?)

Nitpicks:

• Perhaps damage could be inversely proportional to distance. (You can make this a configurable part)

Overview:

• The spell is quite simple, yet I do not see any instances leaking here.
• The concept of the spell is solid and oddly familiar, which affects its' originality. The spell's simplicity in implementation may be the cause of this.
• In real-time gameplay, it is unlikely for the caster to finish channeling the spell due to stuns, ensnares, and disables that abound (though this is also configurable).
• Damage dealt, as stated above, could be made inversely proportional.
• Yet, the spell works, and is MUI, as far as my tests show.

Status:

• Approved

It's intended for full duration. It's configurable by making the ability in Object Editor not disable other abilities.

Nice idea, I'll add that when I have the time.

Hehehe, must thank Bribe for that.
Yeah, it's pretty common concept to be fair, just slight creativity difference.
True that.
Alright.
Mostly from Spell System for that.

Thanks for the approval.

 

[Wrda]

Simple. needs complexity. originality.

Adding special effects doesn't make it more complex, maybe a bit more original.
In my humble opinion, this spell needs some kind of special after damaging the enemies, like a buff reducing armor or movement and attack speed, something related with the electric discharge, that's up to you.
Else we can all agree that this would be just another spell with damage and some spell effects like many others out there. Don't take it wrong but it just bores me so much when sometimes I look at some parts of spell section and they can have the "amazing math" and "special effects" complexity, but in reality they don't do anything other than damage.
In the context of this spell I think it is missing something like a buff. I'm pretty sure it will make the spell more appealing and even more original.

 

[Daffa]

Adding special effects doesn't make it more complex, maybe a bit more original.
In my humble opinion, this spell needs some kind of special after damaging the enemies, like a buff reducing armor or movement and attack speed, something related with the electric discharge, that's up to you.
Else we can all agree that this would be just another spell with damage and some spell effects like many others out there. Don't take it wrong but it just bores me so much when sometimes I look at some parts of spell section and they can have the "amazing math" and "special effects" complexity, but in reality they don't do anything other than damage.
In the context of this spell I think it is missing something like a buff. I'm pretty sure it will make the spell more appealing and even more original.

Thanks for the criticism. I'll take a buff effect from the discharge into consideration.