Killface's Naga Temple

[Killface]

Here's my first terrain. Tell me what you think of it.

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

It lacks atomsphere, enviromental doodads, and tile variation. Add some trees, shrubs, shells, etc.

 

[~Void~]

Do you like it?

 

[Gilles]

Not great to be honest. Decent for an early terrain. You need to use fog and you need to learn to place doodads better.

 

[Killface]

Do you like it?

To tell you the truth, no. When I envisioned this, I thought of something much different. Problems arose among the appearance of the lack of stairs. Sadly, when I used stone blocks as stairs it was to dark and didn't match the cliffs. The jungle appears very half-a$$ed to me. The doodads weren't placed correctly, thus it just looked like one big, confusing jumble of doodads.The edges of the shallow water looked very strange for being perfectly straight and so shallow.

 

[Oziris]

Nope nothing special it is to emty add some shrubse different tilest rain ,fog man look terrain of othe people...

 

[Mor)L(unE]

I miss rocks. perhaps you could retint the doodads to match with the cliffs, or dont use cliffs at all

 

[Nudl9]

You need some serious structure and mix it up a little so it doesnt looks so artificial.
Especially work more on the water it looks bugged up...

 

[money-meow]

That terrain is great!

 

[Naze]

To tell you the truth, no. When I envisioned this, I thought of something much different. Problems arose among the appearance of the lack of stairs. Sadly, when I used stone blocks as stairs it was to dark and didn't match the cliffs. The jungle appears very half-a$$ed to me. The doodads weren't placed correctly, thus it just looked like one big, confusing jumble of doodads.The edges of the shallow water looked very strange for being perfectly straight and so shallow.

You said almost everything. You forgot to say that the line between the water and the sand at the beach is too correct. You must use the raise tool with a large circular brush, so it will look better.

The tile variation lacks...

You need more train.