[Cinematic] Just For Laughs

[Septimus]

Hi, I have create a cinematic. I would like to know how the comedy material goes on.

The camera doesn't move cause there is a reason for it.

Download link is at below.

Just For Laughs

 

[Vicboy]

Wait... So you simulate people getting tricked in Warcraft?

Well, I've never watched seen a trick show in cartoons and etc.

I'll try it asap. Just hope it does giggle me...

EDIT:

After the Presidential Meeting... It was funny... Before that? It was a waste.

Get your jokes from MAD TV or something, cause Just For Laughs bores me a lot after its first season.

But it was good. Just not impressive... Or something to waste time on...

Oh, and stick with your avatar... Its ancient...

 

[Septimus]

I just use the title for my map.

And taking a jokes from TV are simply lack of creativity.

 

[Elite Slayer]

Good map

The cop and robber part was awesome.

Robber 1: Haha, stupid cops. Probably trying to get around the river now.
*Gun clicks*
Robber 2: Oh, shi-

Overall, it was very good. The humor was acceptable, the atmosphere the map pace set was very suitable for the sort of mood it wanted.

Also, the juvenile abomination fart part was also very good.

After his fart spreads through the continent, the national guard are aware.
Agent 1: What the hell? What is this? *Looking at radar*
Agent 2: Um..nuclear holocaust?

You could've maybe added that

Overall, I'd give it 82% / 100%

• Terraining - 7.2/10
• Humor - 8.9/10
• Triggering - 8.8/10

 

[Total_Warrior]

thought it was very good and it just made me laugh when the kid is like

Quote!

''dad what does f*ck mean?''
''Means to eat''
''Mom can i f*ck the turkey tonight?''

 

[Landmine]

Isn't JfL/G planned pranks (like someone pouncing out of a bush or something)? Not random events (AFHV-ish)? Anyways, it made me laugh, but sometimes of pure WTF. Could have improved, could have gotten a few more original things in. The swoop da woop part was a bit off. The ability launched before the text appeared, which was just a small glitch, but it didn't seem so funny (could have not done the ability and had the guy free the other, yet he trips and falls to his death).
Terrain: 4/5 (well done, well planned. Did not exceed average)
Creativity: 3/5 (most was creative and original, yet some I just saw and went "WTF")
Humor: 3/5 (made me laugh, but somtimes for the wrong reasons)
Triggering: 4.5/5 (better then I could have ever done. Better than expected, but not by much)
Execution: 4/5 (came out great. Everything was put together really well, but not exceedingly well done)
Average: 3.75/5 (averaged. Wasn't the best I've seen, but wasn't near as bad as I've seen. I can't say I am demanding a sequel though)
Overall it was good and original, but can be improved.

 

[Vicboy]

Nah, the execution wasn't so great... Some delays made me feel bored...

But Elite Slayer's idea was funny... Nuclear Holocaust

 

[Septimus]

Isn't JfL/G planned pranks (like someone pouncing out of a bush or something)? Not random events (AFHV-ish)? Anyways, it made me laugh, but sometimes of pure WTF. Could have improved, could have gotten a few more original things in. The swoop da woop part was a bit off. The ability launched before the text appeared, which was just a small glitch, but it didn't seem so funny (could have not done the ability and had the guy free the other, yet he trips and falls to his death).
Terrain: 4/5 (well done, well planned. Did not exceed average)
Creativity: 3/5 (most was creative and original, yet some I just saw and went "WTF")
Humor: 3/5 (made me laugh, but somtimes for the wrong reasons)
Triggering: 4.5/5 (better then I could have ever done. Better than expected, but not by much)
Execution: 4/5 (came out great. Everything was put together really well, but not exceedingly well done)
Average: 3.75/5 (averaged. Wasn't the best I've seen, but wasn't near as bad as I've seen. I can't say I am demanding a sequel though)
Overall it was good and original, but can be improved.

Well, the shoop da woop is funny if you know what is that.
Thanks for telling me the glitch, I did't notice that.
As for the jokes, I make it as simple as possible for viewer cause some of them might not understand it.

Hmmm, based on your score system. It should be 74/100 or 4/5

 

[Avex]

YouTube - Shoop Da Whoop! 300 Edition

Is the original.

 

[Septimus]

lol.. firing my lazor ? i though is shoop da woop

 

[Elite Slayer]

It basically goes like this:

"I'ma chargin' mah lazer...SHOOP DA WHOOP!!! *Boom*". A common internet phenomena, especially displayed in the "This is Sparta" scene in 300, as shown on YouTube.

Shoop da woop is basically the sound made as he fires his "lazer".

 

[Avex]

Actually the Laser idea was first created by Dom Fera ( I know him in RL ) and its called The Laser Collection, he has two. People make spoofs like the 300 one, and in the description of his first collection says Shoop da Whoop on it.

 

[Deitri]

lol.. firing my lazor ? i though is shoop da woop

It's whoop.

Btw, boring cinematic, lol.